put a drop shadow on it
nice bars keep it up
put a drop shadow on it
nice bars keep it up
Originally Posted by TheToy
what side? and thanks im tryin to go back to the basics lol
i would say go to the left it will be smoother
i would like some crits on my ishhhhh
Last edited by woonybomber; 03-15-2010 at 10:01 PM.
nah man just some girls name
ahhaah, Fix your E btw, the curved part is making itself look ugly.
btw please check otu the sticker's and look at my block buster sticker :3
ahhaah, Fix your E btw, the curved part is making itself look ugly.
btw please check otu the sticker's and look at my block buster sticker :3
woner can u post some white/black outlines? just straight up no color lol i cant really crit unless i can only see the letter strutture
WOWcouple pen sketches. nothing special
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Avil that simple is working real well for you.
for me thats special. how did that come to you? did it just randomly come to you or does it come deeply from your imagination?
that second ballpoint's lookin pretty clean!
that second ballpoint's lookin pretty clean!
NM- them ball points are very clean, i wanna see more from u!
bigel- im reallly diggin the Y at the end of joey. i dont like the hoops in the chars ears but only cuz i worked with a bitch that had thos for 2 years and she was all emo and shit, never liked them since. lol
bummpp? ive alredy got a drop shadow on the left i just need some pointers so the next one turns out even better
crits? i need an idea for 3d too not sure how to approach this one.. new word.
Last edited by Sesh-it-up; 03-16-2010 at 01:26 AM.
I don't think you need crit's, the lettering is PERFECT. well thats just in my opinon. If you need drop shadow then it's kinda like using a vanishing point but making it a drop shadow.
Theres some quality material on this page- bump-
NM- Im diggin the second one- real clean, I like the nice blend of letters with straight lines along side letters with curved lines- purple doesnt hurt either
BIGel- I'm feeling everything, style mostly- (BIG-L RIP) I like how you used the thick lines and mixed in the really thin lines throughout all the images. Don't know why you're in the toy forum actually.
Theres some quality material on this page- bump-
NM- Im diggin the second one- real clean, I like the nice blend of letters with straight lines along side letters with curved lines- purple doesnt hurt either
BIGel- I'm feeling everything, style mostly- (BIG-L RIP) I like how you used the thick lines and mixed in the really thin lines throughout all the images. Don't know why you're in the toy forum actually.
Finished this for the production.
^nice, only thing i dont like is the curve in the k. doesnt really fit in
most recent sketch. tried to make it a alts euro style.
I think there's a lot of flaws. The letters get smaller towards the back. The second T is out of proportion and there's too much empty space between the r and t
siko-those extensions on the S need reworking. and that leg on the K seems to get smaller toward the bottom.
Last edited by -Empty-Can-; 03-16-2010 at 02:15 PM.
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
just a simple havent been on here in a while the stot looks good but kick out the R kinda ruined i think
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Try to keep the slants in your letters consistent.
I'm not sure about that R yet. I need something to take the place between the T and R. Looks really open.
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
DONT MIND THE ARROWS , PLEASE CRIT THE REST
Sin - Nice
Empty can - maybe work on your stucture
Redeyes - nice simple, cant go wrong with that
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