Blackbooks

[Inlyn08]

What the fuck is with the onslaught of double posting?
And Flawless is right, the 3D should be thicker.
However, I am unsure if I agree with the way the S looks.

[sens415]

So I thought I'd try something new and do a sort of stop motion of a piece in my black book. What do you guys think? Leave comments on YouTube if you want.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKn6_GIieTY

[Sesh-it-up]

i was requested to come in here and post my shit


crits? and anything to improve my lettering?

FRESH AS FUCK!!! thickin the 3d, move the F to the left a lil and grab a shit load of paint and a roller and get that shit done sonn! best ive seen from you yet.

[CrustOner]

THe A's too wide.

[PegCityBoy]

permapaques+hungry=

now i know what you guys are thinking, 540 mg is a lot of sodium for one package, but it's hard to care when they're that delicious

cocacola - stuff on the last page was aids sick, not feelin the one on this page as much
Rosie - drop shaddow is off in a few places, also the structure or RSE needs work
Flask - only the top half of your flick is loading for me so cant say too much about the piece but good to see your getting name brand hot chocolate, the last thing you want is low end hot chocolate.

[mista_dza]

and to comment on Peg...i hope you dont write penis...:P

but i like the P without a hole it shapes it up well, good color choice

maybe tighten up that N a little bit if you know what i mean

[SicK-]

Crits?

[Sesh-it-up]

queeeerrr

[mista_dza]

and you call that giving someone crits?

just curious...

[flask1995]

Crits?

okay, but they're extention's that are unneccessary like the bottom left A extention. as well as the middle bar extention and the bottom right also. just keep it like A not like _A_ or else it'll look ugly.

[TheToy]

I dig the concept of this. The twist/overlap of the bars. I like that 'E'.

This would be a good piece for a freight.

[AteskOne]

no, no....no. work on graf a lot more before you start hitting freights.

basic sketch for a poster design for my boys radio station.

still workin on the charac. not sure how happy i am with him.

[lord_plankton]

the charac is so tiny but id say he needs more dynamic n life, but for pre design o whatever your on ya way ...what about two battle angry spittin motherfuckers??? in their mid his logo or somethin.. and on its sides huge speakers like lots of em...just some ideas...

[DJ.ADDix]

[smoggy_mcfly]

not to sure where i shoul post this

[Rosie716]

people need to start givin some critts if the want some.

[smoggy_mcfly]

nmcontrol thts dope

[hpir]

del-not realy feelin it
nmcontrol-looks prety nice but i have no idea waht it says?
dj.aadix-bars my brothah, start out simple use key board letters to hep u out

crits?

[LIZARD]

hpir-the shadow on that extension on the N doesnt make sense..u dont see the shadow on the bottom of the letters so that means u wouldnt see one on the bottom of that part.

[hpir]

ya i just noticed it but w/e