The v is racking my flippin knoggin
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
what up? i always just sketch shit an' never finish it. this is the first piece i've ever drawn in my new black book... i bit the majority of the letter style, but i wanted to play around with simple overlaps and shit just to see if i could do it... i know i made some f-ups, but crits are greatly welcome
Sp!ff your shits hot man. Keep it up
Dank i like it but what's the deal with your highlights? they look like upside down "h" or 4's
dank the letters are wack try and keep your bars comsistent.
spiff that shits ugly go reallly simple for now.
smaller pics=better crits
DANK - That's a good start. The 3D on the "R" is missing.
SP!FF - You have the connecting bits going into, and coming out of, the next letter at odd angles. Since you say that that was a "BITE" off of some letter style, try something more simple, like SHEM said.
Shem is from florida
crits? tried to do something different. looked better earlier on
should i finish?
your should straighten your letters, lose the extensions and fix that W. Then finish it.
not finished yet, just working on the essentials for the night, anyway crits are nice , also that goes for what fill etc..
Last edited by mista_dza; 03-25-2010 at 12:04 AM. Reason: im horrible at spelling.
wat do u mean dont lay out the w? like take it out? and shesh thanks man
The letters dont have to much flow. It kinda looks liek you drew seperate letters then put it all together. The F U E all have a simmiler bend but the K just ruins that repetition of flow. The the W is super wide and totally random. Whats up with that var ontop of it? You need to work on matching your letter style's and dont bend your letters so much..
i kinda went over board its hard for me to tell when to stop and simplify...