DEL- top one is ugly. Bottom one is a straight bite off of a graffiti font, but you forgot the star in the D. The othrs look decent
DEL- top one is ugly. Bottom one is a straight bite off of a graffiti font, but you forgot the star in the D. The othrs look decent
polar- I love ur shit, not tryin to hate but there is a polar alredy on the east coast of canada but keep it up mang ur shit looks fly.
cweaz- not feelin the W but its close.
jive- stick to bars u got a longg way, i dig ur handys tho they remind me of mine when i was younger
tofe- change that F fool. and the bar of the T.
sare- dont push the style, put in the work and it will come. ease off the wildness, go back to the basics for a bit.
del- stick to bars with jive for now.
junk- the N an K should flow like the J and U
fukew- the K and W look a lil offset.
ill have pics for u guys to ragg out in a day or two. keep up the sketchin!
Last edited by Sesh-it-up; 03-24-2010 at 01:16 AM.
thank you... but i hate my P&R.. if anyone wants to help with that plzOriginally Posted by Sesh-it-up
The v is racking my flippin knoggin
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
what up? i always just sketch shit an' never finish it. this is the first piece i've ever drawn in my new black book... i bit the majority of the letter style, but i wanted to play around with simple overlaps and shit just to see if i could do it... i know i made some f-ups, but crits are greatly welcome
finale getting into pieceing
so crit
Sp!ff your shits hot man. Keep it up
Dank i like it but what's the deal with your highlights? they look like upside down "h" or 4's
ya i know lol i hate them
just pretend they r not there lol
dank the letters are wack try and keep your bars comsistent.
spiff that shits ugly go reallly simple for now.
smaller pics=better crits
DANK - That's a good start. The 3D on the "R" is missing.
SP!FF - You have the connecting bits going into, and coming out of, the next letter at odd angles. Since you say that that was a "BITE" off of some letter style, try something more simple, like SHEM said.
Shem is from florida
crits? tried to do something different. looked better earlier on
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should i finish?
should i finish?
your should straighten your letters, lose the extensions and fix that W. Then finish it.
The way the letters bend in places is just awkward. And don't lay out that W. Especially with that bar on it.
should i finish?
No, no nononooo.
not finished yet, just working on the essentials for the night, anyway crits are nice , also that goes for what fill etc..
goodnight
Last edited by mista_dza; 03-24-2010 at 11:04 PM. Reason: im horrible at spelling.
personaly i like that fukew just keep atter it will be clean in no timee
wat do u mean dont lay out the w? like take it out? and shesh thanks man
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