The letters dont have to much flow. It kinda looks liek you drew seperate letters then put it all together. The F U E all have a simmiler bend but the K just ruins that repetition of flow. The the W is super wide and totally random. Whats up with that var ontop of it? You need to work on matching your letter style's and dont bend your letters so much..
Originally Posted by lord_plankton
i kinda went over board its hard for me to tell when to stop and simplify...
sear
mmmhh id say look at the letters youve goin on there n give em a fat black outline without all that stuff extension crap..and all the "cuts"
..just the pure letters n see what you got n try to develop from there , make them sheer letters fit n flow
still way too un essential shit much goin on...and the essential shit aint lookin too good
Last edited by lord_plankton; 03-25-2010 at 02:54 PM.
thanks... i tried to simplify a bit more
kinda reminds be of saber, cool shit yo im curious to see how it would look with 3-d or shadow..
Well Sear if you could paint that it's be dope but anything other than an amazing fill would be whack
K and E are whack, dude
Last edited by Fury; 03-25-2010 at 05:40 PM. Reason: BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE IT
The forests of Timber have changed.
But the owls are still around.
3 people told you to change that w
and the curve on his letters, lol.
Kew the color scheme is okay but i dont like the K.
Crits?
Edit: i know the L is horrible
bimp? crit.o ok
Crits
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looks alright polar. loose the little kick off the bottom of the P. also looks like your letters get smaller as they go. work on making them all the same height. round out the inner circle of the A and work on that R.
patchy- i'd say go a lot simpler. i cant make out any letters after the L.
kewl- that fill needs a lot of work.
half of a piece for my next class project. designing a skateboard deck. will say pergatory when finished.
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tried some new 3D...crits?
somethin new
atesk-lookin good, id like to see it when finished
del-from what ive seen in the past from u, this is definately an improvemnt.
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
messed it up with the maker i used but its w/e
redeyes-i like that simple but i think that face in the O could be better
Looks weird with the V having no 3-d even though its still proper.
tried some new 3D...crits?
I dont know if your trolling but... if you dont know who sever is you should quit now.
Last edited by weakfingers; 03-25-2010 at 11:00 PM.
oh snaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!
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