that R is better for sure. not like I mentioned but still good. the V seems thinner than everthing... I dunno. those letters are pretty tight/straight but not that unique, looking good tho. the cracks are tiny.. tight too.Originally Posted by LIZARD
tryin new shit....crits?
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Tofe- its a cool concept even if it is biten, but the O is pretty gross and doesnt fit at all with the other letters Work on it
sevr- i like the cracks and letters but not the back fill. your letters are definatley getting better though
Last edited by Patchy; 03-28-2010 at 12:44 PM.
tofe- the o fucks it up and so does the way the e is away off to the side. dont like it
sevr- an awful lot better than the last one
give me some ideas for the fill
tofe i like some of ur shit but some is jus wackk
bottom page bumptofe- the o fucks it up and so does the way the e is away off to the side. dont like it
sevr- an awful lot better than the last one
give me some ideas for the fill
sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?
atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]
kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat
rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!
^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has
^ really hate how my t came out
^ another pen freestyle
have you thought about doing it good?
bump for crits
tryin new shit....crits?
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop
Dirty, i like it.
after you repeat it and get your bars even then SLOWLY start bending the bars and establishing your own style. and either battle me or dont im not guna post flicks just so you can test the water. so make your mind up either blind battle or puss out. and you def havent shown any progress besides finally making your F in your throw more defined. if you didnt have so many posts id think you were new. and next time just post the straight instead of the rest. oh yeah and i also dont give a fuck that you dont give a fuck. im guna tell you my opinion everytime you post something until you start listening and showing progress.
Fuck off.
haha i appreciate it man,and na im not gonna battle u thats like sticking ur dick in a hole and not knowing whos sucking it
TOFE..
To be honest.. there's really no variation in what you've been posting. It really is looking the same. Start from scratch. Forget what you have been sketching and/or painting as your "Norm" and just do something completely different. Then do what you have been doing. Then take the two and compare. I'm not meaning to sound vague.. but when I say do something different. Do something completely different. Analyze some fonts, preferably ones you feel you are capable of replicating.
Because from what I have seen.. and I agree with Leaks there isn't much progress.
Leaks, you been on a two week long rag ride with Aunt Flo...
Post a flick.
Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!
Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.
inlyn - i dont really bite letters man i just do whatever comes to my head...but i can give it a shot,were can i look at some fonts?
^MS Word?
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
haha word,gonna bang out some shit with a cursive font...
works on ur tag too.. the 1 above that straight letter is gross
not saying my tag doesnt need work,but it is solid..that one is just really really wack because i was shrooming mad hard
Yea
I like it dude gettin the bar shit down I see straight progress keep at it and come fuckin chill you hooker
Now in my younger days I used to sport a rag
Backpack full of cans plus a four-four mac
G'd up from the feet up
Blued up from the shoe up, hardcore
Loc'n, smokin and drinkin 'til we threw up ('til we threw up)
At the yard, taggin, hittin fools up
Ditchin my class, just to fuck yo' school up
haha ok cool.
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