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    Quote Originally Posted by LIZARD View Post
    lose the little bumps on the B and make the E more bubbly to flow with the rest..throw a shadow on that bitch to
    and watch out on that handstyle cuz it looks like BOPLE...make the R moe defined
    Well said.

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    done - it looks pretty good but i would work on the e. the n squiggly could be a bit easier too

    heres one i did a few days ago, tell me what you guys think


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    solid, you could try to lower the m or rise the k, upper leg k too slim , k overall not really suit. same goes for i ,but than again i overall like it..a lil work and itll turn out dope straight simple

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    first one ive uploaded, need some feedback. thanks.
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    AMERO - i would lose the characters and all the fancy stuff and just work on letters. start out with simples and just gradually try new things. start it easy man, or else youll over do it

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    thanks, i will keep that in mind. thanks for the constructive criticism.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ManikOner View Post

    im feeling this... the M is weirding me out





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    polar im feeling the second one except the "r" try doing it as a higher case "R"

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    ^^^ lol'd at "higher case"

    no, but Polar, you're adding extensions and extra bars to the wrong places of your letters. That P bar is totally unnecessary and does nothing for the letter, not to mention being the only extension of it's kind. to be totally honest, the only good letter I see is the O.
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    Polar - im likin the throw, not feelin either of your R's though. shorten your r on the piece. i like the o-l connection.
    im with Crust on your P extension but i like your o l and a.

    i got a 'krust' piece i did yesterday. ill post it

    just got prismacolors today, first time tryin em out. tell me what you think.



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    Last edited by ManikOner; 04-04-2010 at 02:06 PM.

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    u needs to flow with the rest mayber make the bottom of the u fatter
    "Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)

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    Quote Originally Posted by LeaksOne View Post
    you gota revise the entire thing. define your letters better. and if your guna have a thick S and Z thicken your M too
    you mean like write all of SKIZM, or just like try to figure out how to get SZM easier to read?
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    throw ideas

    CES:



    Did this one for this chick
    MADDIE:


    What im trying to write now
    CEASR:


    constructive crits?

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    CESP - i like your throwie style. like the A's and E's

    crits?
    Last edited by ManikOner; 04-04-2010 at 08:54 PM.

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    don't know how I feel about it, I think this may have been the toyist thing Ive ever done. lol
    Last edited by Karma; 04-08-2010 at 03:20 PM.
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    Karma-
    Are those two P's?
    If they are loose that extension on the back of them or make it a smaller space.
    other than that I actually like the O and the E. Just lose that little tag thing coming off of the O. Its unnecessary. Its pretty dope just work on making the letters cleaner.

    Manik-
    I like what you're going for. Just work on your letter structure more. I don't like the T or the S in the Krust one. I really like the style you used in the pen sketch with the green outline you posted earlier though. I kinda like the red and yellow one too. Just keep practicing.

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    local stuff ive seen...


    "Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)

    "I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg

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    Quote Originally Posted by Capo Izi View Post
    you mean like write all of SKIZM, or just like try to figure out how to get SZM easier to read?
    define your letters meaning make every letter look like what its suppose to be. and even your bars meaning make every letter the same width
    Fuck off.

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    canvas

    i dont like it so much but its my first one

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    Waste of a canvas :/
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