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    I wouldnt make those tips pointy.
    also your hand looks like it says "Dick"

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    XD

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    No, that's dope. Props.

    I'm just not digging the side tags and the E in your tag.

    This better not be Die59 taking us for a ride. That I looks maaaad familiar.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    No, that's dope. Props.

    I'm just not digging the side tags and the E in your tag.

    This better not be Die59 taking us for a ride. That I looks maaaad familiar.

    Agreed, I smell a trick.
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    naw after my first post some random said "blah blah switch ur name another die" i really dont care if hes better then me or whatever if he aint in the same country who gives a shit.

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    Been awhile!
    What do you homies think of this steez?


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    help.... it looks awfull to me
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    Tofe - Im diggin the first one, love the whole outline thing. only thing i can say is for doin that, you should keep ALL of those little lines goin one way over the whole thing. like in the O you have em up and down, on the bottom theyre angled, and on the top they look like theyre tryin to straighten out. keep it all one way. looks SICK though.

    Dier - like the piece, what theyre sayin about the I i dono man. keep it, it looks sick. but yes, your hand does look like it says dick lol...

    Keso - piece is pretty ill, only thing i would MAYBE change is where you did the bit coming off the O, dont use the gray in the middle of the O on the right side. if that makes sense. Like your K E and S. Maybe give your E a little bit more room too.... SICK!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by medacog1 View Post


    help.... it looks awfull to me
    it dont look bad. dont do that with your P and make more room for the A. its pro man, keep it clean.

    Also keep the 3d goin in the P. you missed it

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    Polar- the lar part looks a little squished but other than that its really dope. Its clean! keep it up.

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    Bring the leg from the CIRCLE PART of the R, not the base bar.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ManikOner View Post
    it dont look bad. dont do that with your P and make more room for the A. its pro man, keep it clean.

    Also keep the 3d goin in the P. you missed it
    I was trying to do a dropshadow...... lol

    I get what your saying crust
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    yea man, even as a drop shadow youd have to drop it below the curve of the P and at the top of the hole in the P. like you did with your A and your R

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    Sorry for double post again. heres one I just did. I think I keep messing up once i get to the N. think its still a bit thin, and im not sure about the I and K.

    Crits?


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    uh. either make the leg on the M straight or curve the K like the M

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    Keep your bars consistant and proportionate .

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    eark: keep at it, looks pretty sick, I wanna try stuff like this but never turned out good

    manik: its okay, but that handie still needs work. the K needs more work, the K comes from the top leg, but if your doing that then try putting it more higher.
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    Sezr, i might start writing sezer or/and sezr for both.

    just a practice piece, made basically tried putting bend's into letter's, I messed up on the R but eh, practice makes perfect eh?

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    sezer - i like the style, love the fill. just keep your 3d all goin the same ways. missed the bottom of the Z and the R. also the top of the hole in the R. just give it a bit of work and take more time on makin the fill more proportioned and even and it would look real good!

    as for me i know where you guys are seein but i need more room. my biggest problem is wanting to continue on and kill the page but the page doesnt give me enough room... thats where walls come in handy
    but i guess i just need to learn to size my stuff down, it would look a lot better.
    Last edited by ManikOner; 04-10-2010 at 01:44 AM.

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    cop a longer blackbook, i got 1 that fits all my viseversa shit perfectly
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