Blackbooks

[CrustOner]

Waste of a canvas :/

[Amends_Ego]

Waste of a canvas :/

haha i lol'd

[Capo Izi]

Tryin some shit out..





Crits?

[FlippingChickens]

[Capo Izi]

Tryin some shit out..





Crits?

bumppp

[FlippingChickens]

go simple man dont be doing drips and shit

[BlacktodaFuture]

doodle, crits?

flipping chickens: hard to tell that the O is a O. the middle bar on the F prob shouldn't be lopping bc it looks out of place. and there should be more shine.

[-Empty-Can-]

I think the middle of the E extends out way too far.

[weakfingers]

Tofe - Props on the cyursive style that shit can be tough, I stil havent been able to sketch something worthwhile outlining, the 3d also really sets it off.


quick 5 minuts exchange.

[ManikOner]

Chicken - That looks sick, the 3d would start confusing me
Safe - Im diggin the whole thing, love the s. im with Empty on your e though

[BlacktodaFuture]

the thing w. the E was to match the S a little bit but i think i went a little to much w. it. thx for crits.

weak: ehh, idk what to say about it. not really feeling it honestly. i feel like the drips ruin the letters.

[cocacola]

nice stuff on this page

[W_G_O_N_E]

for the battle that hasn't been posted

[-Empty-Can-]

not feeling that brown rainbow around it.

[walkingcarpet]

Safe. I love it

[CrustOner]

haven't sketched in a while.. I dig the S.. but my K killed it D: I'm not even going to bother finishing this.

[mista_dza]

blahblahblah names, who needs one haha but whatever right now im just doin the word Self/selfish looks cool imo. anywayyyy
i did this tonight untill, you see that blotch above the L, well marker like leaked i suppose....(i have these otr .840 artist twin markers) i dont know whatever i got mad and didnt wanna do the 3d on it....


nonetheless...
sketch i did in class

[chikkenbone]

mista- nice straight letters definatly keep working with simple shit like that
crust- loose all that crazy shit, and see how it comes out just using the same bars. maybe dont go so big on the k
W_G_O_N_E- that ironlak looks pretty ill

what do you think?

[FlippingChickens]

Safe - probably my favortie sketch from you..just fix the middle of that e and your good

weak - looks good for 5 minute's but im not really a fan of that dripy style

coca - fix how the I sticks out to the right like that because it takes away from the t..overall looks good but ive seen better from you

wgone - its really clean but if you put less ripped things inside your letters it would have been better imo, it would have looked really nice if you left it with that white forcefield too but still looks good man

selfish -really like that,you should paint it!

jek - use pencil because your kinda shakey with the marker

crust - the s is cool i agree but that robotic stuff ur doing inside your letters take away from your letters

quiet - im really fealing that simple,,try a capital e next time and fix the u connecting with the I..i like that t

manik - thanks

[lord_plankton]

crust, yeah s is good, k is a lil too close in my opinion plus its too high and its big front leg has a wired angle, try to use ya bottom s as k leg should make a difference...