looks pretty sloppy. guess you get an A for effort. i kinda like that E tho. alot.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
how good r u? post what uve done in the past
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
very legit snore...
Don't know if I like this it's sloppy but whats new
Snore - diggin that throwy
take - looks dope
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 04-19-2010 at 06:38 PM.
take- the one with red bubbles is ok, the one with blue bubbles ur trying too hard and it just looks bad, i just dont like changing styles for each letter... the last one is good though, the gray just makes it look sloppy, use a bright color for the outline...
gumonshoe- it looks real nice, dope throw, but i thought of somethin to make the S match the O and E a little more, try somethin like this maybe? (but cleaner of course)
tofe that top one is ur best bet... just watch which bars are straight and which are curved... a few places one side of the bar is curved and the other is straight and that never looks right, u can mix the 2 (curves and straight) but not on the same bar u feel what im sayin?
Last edited by Zookyook; 04-19-2010 at 06:51 PM.
gum-for some reason when i read that the first time i dont think "the second one" came up or i just had a retarded moment...i was just way to confused for something so little
zook - bro i dont get what u mean?
its easy... im bored so ill take the time and explain hah... i circled a few spots where the bars just dont match up from one side to the other, and thats why the piece is lacking as a whole u know what i mean? when a line goes a certain direction then it only looks right if the other line on the opposite side of the bar is going in the exact direction (or at a defined, constant angle).... when it all matches up ur shit will look way better mayn...
if u look at the second pic u posted the bottom of the O is a prime example....
Last edited by Zookyook; 04-19-2010 at 07:11 PM.
my socks and cakies are once again in a photo lol. re outheres another. I reoutlined the one in yellow and it looks cleaner. Ill post it up a bit later
lose that extension on the T or put it on the other side...it looks like JAKE
i also just noticed that your A kinda looks like an M...put a hole in it to make it look like an A more
tofe-watch the 3d (unless thats what your goin for)
crits on this
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To me: I'm iffy on the S bc of the extension on the bottom. The arrow is kinda big and the double extensions off that bar im not really feeling and they seem unnessary
Icon: Bars, not triangles.
Freak: That throw is busted. Go simpler.
Take: Just watch your bars but most of your shit is not half bad.
ZOOKYORK KNOWS HOW TO GIVE CRITS!
GET YOUR BARS UP.