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    Quote Originally Posted by take2 View Post
    mezzaround. A bit slopy cus I don't have finetipped paint markers.

    Lol toez^
    bump again can someone give me crits that arent about my uncut toe nails

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    looks pretty sloppy. guess you get an A for effort. i kinda like that E tho. alot.

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    GET YOUR BARS UP.

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    I've been using Sate2 for over half a year now and today i decided it was time for a name change.

    no idea what i want to use though.

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    how good r u? post what uve done in the past
    "Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)

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    very legit snore...
    Don't know if I like this it's sloppy but whats new

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    Snore - diggin that throwy

    take - looks dope







    Last edited by FlippingChickens; 04-19-2010 at 05:38 PM.

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    take- the one with red bubbles is ok, the one with blue bubbles ur trying too hard and it just looks bad, i just dont like changing styles for each letter... the last one is good though, the gray just makes it look sloppy, use a bright color for the outline...

    gumonshoe- it looks real nice, dope throw, but i thought of somethin to make the S match the O and E a little more, try somethin like this maybe? (but cleaner of course)


    tofe that top one is ur best bet... just watch which bars are straight and which are curved... a few places one side of the bar is curved and the other is straight and that never looks right, u can mix the 2 (curves and straight) but not on the same bar u feel what im sayin?
    Last edited by Zookyook; 04-19-2010 at 05:51 PM.

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    gum-for some reason when i read that the first time i dont think "the second one" came up or i just had a retarded moment...i was just way to confused for something so little

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    zook - bro i dont get what u mean?

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    its easy... im bored so ill take the time and explain hah... i circled a few spots where the bars just dont match up from one side to the other, and thats why the piece is lacking as a whole u know what i mean? when a line goes a certain direction then it only looks right if the other line on the opposite side of the bar is going in the exact direction (or at a defined, constant angle).... when it all matches up ur shit will look way better mayn...



    if u look at the second pic u posted the bottom of the O is a prime example....
    Last edited by Zookyook; 04-19-2010 at 06:11 PM.

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    my socks and cakies are once again in a photo lol. re outheres another. I reoutlined the one in yellow and it looks cleaner. Ill post it up a bit later

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    lose that extension on the T or put it on the other side...it looks like JAKE

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    o yea lol

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    i also just noticed that your A kinda looks like an M...put a hole in it to make it look like an A more

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    tofe-watch the 3d (unless thats what your goin for)

    crits on this
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    Crits:

    To me: I'm iffy on the S bc of the extension on the bottom. The arrow is kinda big and the double extensions off that bar im not really feeling and they seem unnessary

    Icon: Bars, not triangles.

    Freak: That throw is busted. Go simpler.

    Take: Just watch your bars but most of your shit is not half bad.

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    Last edited by BlacktodaFuture; 04-19-2010 at 10:24 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shay70 View Post
    tofe-watch the 3d (unless thats what your goin for)

    crits on this
    yo man that shits kinda SICCCK bro the colors are pretty TIGHT id say. KEEP THAT SHIT UP MAN!

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    GET YOUR BARS UP.


 

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