take- i like your shit just work on maken it look cleaner, it seems your stuff is just blobs, try using a sharpie to define your letters.
this does look like it says shitty lol.... but also looks a lot like MS's style to me, in a way
You're right, it does.
Your letter structure isn't great, the V on bottom pic is much smaller than the S and A, top one is... messey and the lines aren't straight and the outline blue thing is badly done. thats just my opinion.
write it just like this
no corny add ons.
and the S on that first one is HURTING. if thats a throw revise the entire thing and just do bubble letters
btw no offense but sav is such a cheesy name.
seein sum nice shit..
did this 1 when i got home y'day.. was blazed as fuck!
All the shit I've posted on PG before.
Then someone told me I should go simpler, so I did.
Then some throws:
Then I went simpler after I was told to do straight letters:
Deviated from simples again, and got scolded :P
And now I'm only going to do pieces like this:
Crits are very welcomed =)
BigO - i think that looks sick! love the style
Sav - only one i kinda like is your first post bottom left. work on your letter structure and just do simples. Like Leaks said, just make it SAV with no buillshit on it. tryin to connect letters or add arrows. just start simple.
Care - yea it looks like your tryin to move WAY to fast. all your pieces are different and wacked. only one i like is your last. dont try crazy fills or connections. just do simple straight letters, add the 3d, give all the letters the same decent fill and itll look totally legit.
Yeah, as I said, that's what I'm trying to move to now.
I only do some throwies and very simple letters.
Throwies to not get bored, simple letters for practice. Most of those are old, or rather something I've moved away from cause I noticed that I lacked structure.
Thanks for feedback.
"Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)
Care i'll be honest, i can't color for shit, but from the looks of it, you're focusing on color too much. just do structure sketches. fuck the 3d, fuck the shadow, and fuck the color. get your structure down and then work on the other shit.