Blackbooks

[LIZARD]

i also just noticed that your A kinda looks like an M...put a hole in it to make it look like an A more

[Freaker]

[Shay70]

tofe-watch the 3d (unless thats what your goin for)

crits on this

[BlacktodaFuture]

Crits:

To me: I'm iffy on the S bc of the extension on the bottom. The arrow is kinda big and the double extensions off that bar im not really feeling and they seem unnessary

Icon: Bars, not triangles.

Freak: That throw is busted. Go simpler.

Take: Just watch your bars but most of your shit is not half bad.

ZOOKYORK KNOWS HOW TO GIVE CRITS!

[NICCSACC]

tofe-watch the 3d (unless thats what your goin for)

crits on this

yo man that shits kinda SICCCK bro the colors are pretty TIGHT id say. KEEP THAT SHIT UP MAN!

[gumOnShoe]

[take2]

yo gum those throwies are fresh. Wanna exchange before I start bitin you ^_^

[gumOnShoe]

you can bite all you want bro, no anger here.
but sure, PM me what you write, or if you're comfortable with posting it here, do so.

Edit: OH nevermind, i already saw what you write.
ok, i'll do take.
hook me up with an Ikue.

Edit#2: Ok, so i orginally was gonna' make the Top of the the T higher, cause it's short. sadly however, it didn't come out that way, and this green crayola marker i found on the floor on the street is almost dead, so i didn't want to use up more ink cause i like the dry effect this crayola marker gives...

[take2]

aight ima do a straight and post it in the exchange thread and I'll pm it to ya. I want a throwie though those are fresh

edit: aight thanks bro heres yours

The trowie and hand suck but w/e

[-Empty-Can-]

a combination of a throw,straight and piece. Tried to give it that progressive feel if you know what I mean. crits

[RustySpoon]

empty can- I understand what youre trying to do but it just doesnt work IMO, the S throws it off completely. Take off the extension on the bottom left of the R too.

[BlacktodaFuture]

CRITS!?!?

gumonshoe: Really feelin those throws.
Stotr: the top of those T's are kinda big and that top of the S has too many bumps imo.

[markingz.]

hey empty can thats dope man good job

[FlippingChickens]

safe - the k is retarded,the bar coming out the c going to the left looks wierd next to the u,the dexter shit is good but im not fealing the arrows

gum - digging the throws especially that lower case a,the k is bad tho,like your e on the pencil one

empty - the s looks bad with everything else..the r looks bad on the bottom left

[-Empty-Can-]

The S isn't supposed to match. Please refer to the caption under the photo.

[FlippingChickens]

i dont like the thing poping to the left on the top part of ur s throw

[RustySpoon]

FlippingChickens - I'm diggin those throwies but the bottom letters seem like you're trying too hard.

I know I fucked up on the fill.

crits?

[Zookyook]

gotsta work on ur 3d tofe, many mistakes there... and remember what i said yesterday about the lines in ur bars not matching up...

stot it just doesnt look right, i see what ur goin for, and the S is slick for a throw, but im not diggin the style changes in the same piece

safer i like the S, but the arrow extension shouldnt be thicker than the bars in the letter IMO, and it looks too much like the shape of an A... the spot thats shattered might throw u off when u try to make out the S, so maybe shatter the extension part and itll fix both problems...... the fuck china just seems to start a bit small and get bigger on both words, bring the left bar of the F up, and the left bar of the H down and make the C a little bigger and it should look right... is that a thorough crit? hah

[gumOnShoe]

gum - digging the throws especially that lower case a,the k is bad tho,like your e on the pencil one
left

E? those two E's are the same, only difference is that i messed up trying to put shadow in the middle of the E.

oh, and wann'a help me out with the K? never did like how the K's looked like when i did em'.

[Zookyook]

the K is fresh gum... change the E though, dont put a 3d in the middle like that, just a simple horizontal line would work better