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    Crits, Please

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    Your letter structure isn't great, the V on bottom pic is much smaller than the S and A, top one is... messey and the lines aren't straight and the outline blue thing is badly done. thats just my opinion.
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    write it just like this

    SAV

    no corny add ons.

    and the S on that first one is HURTING. if thats a throw revise the entire thing and just do bubble letters

    btw no offense but sav is such a cheesy name.
    Fuck off.

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    can anyone think of a reason why the mod would be deleting my picture posts?

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    show me the crits
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    chill with the arrows. first and fourth are the best. and calm down with the Z in your handy as well.

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    i been having trouble with z's in general

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    seein sum nice shit..

    did this 1 when i got home y'day.. was blazed as fuck!

    any crits?

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    All the shit I've posted on PG before.



    Then someone told me I should go simpler, so I did.

    Schoolbook piece.

    Then some throws:




    Then I went simpler after I was told to do straight letters:


    Deviated from simples again, and got scolded :P


    And now I'm only going to do pieces like this:


    Crits are very welcomed =)

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    BigO - i think that looks sick! love the style

    Sav - only one i kinda like is your first post bottom left. work on your letter structure and just do simples. Like Leaks said, just make it SAV with no buillshit on it. tryin to connect letters or add arrows. just start simple.

    Care - yea it looks like your tryin to move WAY to fast. all your pieces are different and wacked. only one i like is your last. dont try crazy fills or connections. just do simple straight letters, add the 3d, give all the letters the same decent fill and itll look totally legit.

    START SIMPLE!

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    Yeah, as I said, that's what I'm trying to move to now.

    I only do some throwies and very simple letters.

    Throwies to not get bored, simple letters for practice. Most of those are old, or rather something I've moved away from cause I noticed that I lacked structure.

    Thanks for feedback.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thepekins View Post
    i been having trouble with z's in general
    i see a lot of writers use a backwards S experiment with that
    "Theres are plenty of dilapidated out there that need somebody to pray for them i mean you know, on the other hand people are in that position because may be they deserve it or may be because they made the wrong choices...life is a dark fuckin place..and its beautiful in the same token...a lot does grow in the dark" Saber (MSK AWR)

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    Care i'll be honest, i can't color for shit, but from the looks of it, you're focusing on color too much. just do structure sketches. fuck the 3d, fuck the shadow, and fuck the color. get your structure down and then work on the other shit.

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    first sketch, tips?

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    that's not too ugly actually but what the fuck is it supposed to say. and top right corner that extension is too pointy. also, if you're using a ruler, stop immediately.

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    can i has crits?
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    that names really over played some one from where i live delaware writes that and pretty shure like thousands of others do to
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    as long as i dont see that shit in my area im fine with it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CareGr View Post
    All the shit I've posted on PG before.



    Then someone told me I should go simpler, so I did.

    Schoolbook piece.

    Then some throws:




    Then I went simpler after I was told to do straight letters:


    Deviated from simples again, and got scolded :P


    And now I'm only going to do pieces like this:


    Crits are very welcomed =)
    It's been said before, and it will be said again... Go simple. And, if that is simple to you.. make it even more simple. A well colored piece isn't shit if the letters are all screwed up. As well, having solid letters and throwing a fucked up fill will kill it too. Do letters. Get solid simple letters, practice.. practice practice those. Once you feel confident with those throw in 3D.. and so on. But, until you have your base/ foundation ( the letters ) you should slow your roll on all the other stuff. Truth is, if you're not careful you can totally destroy a good piece in one single action.

    Keep at it.


 

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