First of all, the crew's been around since 2003-2004 (I didn't start before recently though) and they've been getting up a bit, so it would be pointless to not keep going with it. It could also be called "Vestkyst" which basically means Westcoast in norwegian.
Anyways, thanks for the crit, and the char is being modified, that was just a quick sketch.
Finished version will be up tommorow.
The cans are just a quick outline of what they're going to be too.
Post moar pix pl0x
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
Thanks for the criticism, I know that I have some what of simples down.
I'm kind of just experimenting, but i will take your thoughts into consideration.
Slek: I'd say that you have the whole "keeping proportionate bars" portion of simples down. However, you've got no flow on the sketches I've seen from you. As I've said before, you've got all of the designs and colors down, and that's all fine and good, but the letters are what matter the most. Keep away from those awkward bends and work on developing a relative flow between your letters.
Crust: Lovin' your characs dude. Nice work.
Asper: I think you're onto something with the top sketch, but watch the sizes of your letters- looks like they get smaller as they go. As far as the bottom one goes, I'd avoid connecting your letters like that for now.
And it's been forever since I've posted sketches, but I've been practicing on girls' names on Facebook, so might as well post 'em up, huh? Comments are appreciated as always...
Oh, and preach Crust!! Lol, I agree, this thread has become WAY too inexperienced. Get better people!
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the j needs some work
came up with it in about 3 minutes
really diggin the c
that says jog and stop cutting off your letters
my favorite of all the others you posted ^
i like the s im not really feelin the y tho
I can see that you are working with a permanent marker, I would suggest a pencil first.
That S" looks alright just take your time.
yeah mogan i think im just gonna stick with pen and pencil just do it dark, cause the markers always fuck up the lines when i do it, legit before i outline it it always looks crisp as fuck and the markers just wreck it. its just a regular Blackbook page btw.