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    Quote Originally Posted by RES4 View Post
    crits?


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    lose the random shit at the ends of your bars all the connections and all the random bends
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    Quote Originally Posted by gumOnShoe View Post
    lol, i've seen this happen before.
    like people writting for mad long without progression at all or only a tad bit if any.
    i personally think the people that are like that don't know what to practice specifically, and that's what immobilizes them in terms of skill.
    people need to learn what to practice or else they'll never progress, in my opinion.
    This is so write... Also they need to learn the roots and appreciate graffiti art for what it is because without the love for it you will lose motivation without motivation you will not have any progress in your skills as a artist.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    Fuck the Tot Black Books thread, the majority of you guys don't give decent crits, since none of you know what is right about it.. fuck man. Alright, I'll do it right now.
    CareGr: Your crew is really called "Vandal Kids?" Oh wow. The character is overly generic, not to mention ugly. And wtf is up with his teeth? the letters are alright, except for that S, and those cans are hideous. If you're doing something simple, at least make it clean.
    Thanks for the crit, and I'm sorry but the crew name is nothing I have any control over.
    First of all, the crew's been around since 2003-2004 (I didn't start before recently though) and they've been getting up a bit, so it would be pointless to not keep going with it. It could also be called "Vestkyst" which basically means Westcoast in norwegian.

    Anyways, thanks for the crit, and the char is being modified, that was just a quick sketch.

    Finished version will be up tommorow.
    The cans are just a quick outline of what they're going to be too.

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    Post moar pix pl0x

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    No More Weekly Toy Battles.

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    Thanks for the criticism, I know that I have some what of simples down.
    I'm kind of just experimenting, but i will take your thoughts into consideration.



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    Slek: I'd say that you have the whole "keeping proportionate bars" portion of simples down. However, you've got no flow on the sketches I've seen from you. As I've said before, you've got all of the designs and colors down, and that's all fine and good, but the letters are what matter the most. Keep away from those awkward bends and work on developing a relative flow between your letters.
    Crust: Lovin' your characs dude. Nice work.
    Asper: I think you're onto something with the top sketch, but watch the sizes of your letters- looks like they get smaller as they go. As far as the bottom one goes, I'd avoid connecting your letters like that for now.

    And it's been forever since I've posted sketches, but I've been practicing on girls' names on Facebook, so might as well post 'em up, huh? Comments are appreciated as always...



    Oh, and preach Crust!! Lol, I agree, this thread has become WAY too inexperienced. Get better people!
    Last edited by b SQUARED 08; 05-02-2010 at 10:58 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    Those are some dope ass characters in your sketch bro! I like how they all want a piece of that mic and dude is givin' them a chance to rock
    Last edited by MoganOne; 05-02-2010 at 11:08 PM.

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    the j needs some work
    came up with it in about 3 minutes
    really diggin the c
    crits

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    that says jog and stop cutting off your letters
    Fuck off.

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    crits? not a fan of the y.

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    are poster paints good for black books
    Quote Originally Posted by Zase View Post
    nope they wont work

    you can only make posters with them
    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    but hey, look at me, I'm deciding to be the nice guy and tell you why you should shut the fuck up. .
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    just try not to get raped by vd infested homeless persons. trust me... i would know.

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    my favorite of all the others you posted ^


    i like the s im not really feelin the y tho

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    Quote Originally Posted by pleasedontstayr View Post

    crits? not a fan of the y.
    The letters I like the most are the T and the A all the other letters are hurrting... I agree the Y is really off and does not fit. The R need more shape and structure because you got that bitch looking like a awkward A lol... I also noticed your shadow is off. Try making all the edges going one way or even picture a vanishing point. It should maake it look a lot cleaner bro trust me.
    I can see that you are working with a permanent marker, I would suggest a pencil first.

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    yeah thats probably the worst S ive ever done haha. im sketching in pencil and outlining later, for visibility. but overall thanks for the crit,

    Quote Originally Posted by UNDERTHEICE View Post
    are poster paints good for black books
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    nope they wont work

    you can only make posters with them
    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    but hey, look at me, I'm deciding to be the nice guy and tell you why you should shut the fuck up. .
    Quote Originally Posted by THEGREATSOUTHERNTRENDKILL View Post
    just try not to get raped by vd infested homeless persons. trust me... i would know.

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    I'm not good at piecing but I'm learning haha

    and that s is the best letter in that piece

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    E kinda looks like a C,

    fixed it up, crits?

    Quote Originally Posted by UNDERTHEICE View Post
    are poster paints good for black books
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    nope they wont work

    you can only make posters with them
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    but hey, look at me, I'm deciding to be the nice guy and tell you why you should shut the fuck up. .
    Quote Originally Posted by THEGREATSOUTHERNTRENDKILL View Post
    just try not to get raped by vd infested homeless persons. trust me... i would know.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pleasedontstayr View Post
    E kinda looks like a C,

    fixed it up, crits?
    Yo man what kind of medium are you using? because what ever i is it is not working for you bro... I think you should avoid those wack paint markers for now and focus on getting your letters to look better... Just use pencils and some ball point pens... You should try to practice your name as much as you can.. But also try practicing to write a lot of other random words... it will help a lot... Think small first then when you got that down go big... Again I like that T because it has a cool style to it...

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    That S" looks alright just take your time.

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    crits?

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    yeah mogan i think im just gonna stick with pen and pencil just do it dark, cause the markers always fuck up the lines when i do it, legit before i outline it it always looks crisp as fuck and the markers just wreck it. its just a regular Blackbook page btw.

    Quote Originally Posted by UNDERTHEICE View Post
    are poster paints good for black books
    Quote Originally Posted by Zase View Post
    nope they wont work

    you can only make posters with them
    Quote Originally Posted by CrustOner View Post
    but hey, look at me, I'm deciding to be the nice guy and tell you why you should shut the fuck up. .
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    just try not to get raped by vd infested homeless persons. trust me... i would know.


 

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