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    sloppy

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    Disregard the fill, crayola markers suck dick xD
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    Oops, double post. D:
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    Quote Originally Posted by Primal View Post

    Disregard the fill, crayola markers suck dick xD
    Tezo? I couldn't read that, until I looked at the hand. Slow down, S I M P L I F Y. Don't make the middle part of the E do that. Simplify, and try again. Oh, and leave fills alone for right now. Work on structure.

    Yeah: Try "Maybe."
    And yes the Tofe's do look like Jofe's. Not to repeat.

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    I'll try a simpler piece. I'll have it up tonight.
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    I don't really like it, but whatever. I coulda used a different color scheme. This isn't a throwie btw..
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    go even simpler and use bars. read new to graffiti forum.
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    whats going on with that E?
    Fuck off.

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    broke the rules and had some fun.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LeaksOne View Post
    whats going on with that E?
    If I was to "assume" I would say that the two bars are bending to connect to form a lowercase e? If that's not it, then I have no idea because that'd be one fubar'd capital E. Either way, it's not working.

    Those bends do not, and will not work. Straight bar it all out, get that down solid. Simples, if you're not familiar with the term go to the "New to Graff" section or Google that. Eventually you'll be bending bars and all that spiffy crap, but if you're totally warping the foundation/ structure of the letter then...


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    tezo- work on your tracing and bars

    Safe- i like everything but the S..dont put it so far behind the A


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    tezo- work on your tracing and bars

    Safe- i like everything but the S..dont put it so far behind the A


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    crits would be great
    new and improved
    made the c more pronounced
    Last edited by bzerkyetii; 05-07-2010 at 11:25 PM.

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    i got 7 mack 11's

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    I'm rolling hard right now hahhaha
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    only thing i would say is revise the R. and make the bottom of the E look like the bottom of your C's
    Last edited by LeaksOne; 05-08-2010 at 01:51 AM.
    Fuck off.

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    Yeah R's alwats were hard for me but whatever I did that in like hyper sppeed
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    haha well for "hyper speed" thats pretty decent
    Fuck off.

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    haha thanks fool
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    try finishing the bottom


    Quote Originally Posted by bzerkyetii View Post

    crits would be great
    new and improved
    made the c more pronounced
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