it is a vanishing point, hes just cut it off. unless ive misunderstood what youve saidOriginally Posted by funhouseXcast
it is a vanishing point, hes just cut it off. unless ive misunderstood what youve said
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
tofe real shit, you've been part of this site since nov 2008 and your progression looks like you started writing last month....you've listened to ONEof the tips i gave you since you've been on the site. you suck. you show no progression and whenever people try to give you honest crits you act like a little bitch. now im not trying to be a dick but honestly graff just might not be your thing. everytime you post you look like your trying SUPER hard. so either start over simple, and by simple i mean thats all you do. not going back to simples for a week then posting more of that whack ass style saying you got simples down. or you can just quit graff. real shit man.
Fuck off.
crits?
tofe-
lose the random shit at the ends of your bars all the connections and all the random bends
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
Fuck the Tot Black Books thread, the majority of you guys don't give decent crits, since none of you know what is right about it.. fuck man. Alright, I'll do it right now.
CareGr: Your crew is really called "Vandal Kids?" Oh wow. The character is overly generic, not to mention ugly. And wtf is up with his teeth? the letters are alright, except for that S, and those cans are hideous. If you're doing something simple, at least make it clean.
drOping: That's wack. You're getting way too ahead of yourself, and you don't understand proper letter structure yet. That background's pink cracks are pretty sick though. Go simpler.
Flask, your bar thickness is way off in most of those letters, and you should learn how to draw an uppercase R. Also, the E should overlap the Z, not the other way around. Best thing on the page though.
Tofe, you should quit graffiti. Because you suck. and you have a big head.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
lol, i've seen this happen before.
like people writting for mad long without progression at all or only a tad bit if any.
i personally think the people that are like that don't know what to practice specifically, and that's what immobilizes them in terms of skill.
people need to learn what to practice or else they'll never progress, in my opinion.
GET YOUR BARS UP.
iv said this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many times
practice letters
letters only
not peices not fills not arrows not anything but letters
lots and lots and lots of letters.
bootom pagecrits?
tofe-
lose the random shit at the ends of your bars all the connections and all the random bends
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
Good shit...
This is so write... Also they need to learn the roots and appreciate graffiti art for what it is because without the love for it you will lose motivation without motivation you will not have any progress in your skills as a artist.
Thanks for the crit, and I'm sorry but the crew name is nothing I have any control over.
First of all, the crew's been around since 2003-2004 (I didn't start before recently though) and they've been getting up a bit, so it would be pointless to not keep going with it. It could also be called "Vestkyst" which basically means Westcoast in norwegian.
Anyways, thanks for the crit, and the char is being modified, that was just a quick sketch.
Finished version will be up tommorow.
The cans are just a quick outline of what they're going to be too.
Post moar pix pl0x
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
Thanks for the criticism, I know that I have some what of simples down.
I'm kind of just experimenting, but i will take your thoughts into consideration.
Slek: I'd say that you have the whole "keeping proportionate bars" portion of simples down. However, you've got no flow on the sketches I've seen from you. As I've said before, you've got all of the designs and colors down, and that's all fine and good, but the letters are what matter the most. Keep away from those awkward bends and work on developing a relative flow between your letters.
Crust: Lovin' your characs dude. Nice work.
Asper: I think you're onto something with the top sketch, but watch the sizes of your letters- looks like they get smaller as they go. As far as the bottom one goes, I'd avoid connecting your letters like that for now.
And it's been forever since I've posted sketches, but I've been practicing on girls' names on Facebook, so might as well post 'em up, huh? Comments are appreciated as always...
Oh, and preach Crust!! Lol, I agree, this thread has become WAY too inexperienced. Get better people!
Last edited by b SQUARED 08; 05-02-2010 at 10:58 PM.
Yo
Those are some dope ass characters in your sketch bro! I like how they all want a piece of that mic and dude is givin' them a chance to rock
Last edited by MoganOne; 05-02-2010 at 11:08 PM.
the j needs some work
came up with it in about 3 minutes
really diggin the c
crits
that says jog and stop cutting off your letters
Fuck off.
crits? not a fan of the y.
my favorite of all the others you posted ^
i like the s im not really feelin the y tho
Not bad
The letters I like the most are the T and the A all the other letters are hurrting... I agree the Y is really off and does not fit. The R need more shape and structure because you got that bitch looking like a awkward A lol... I also noticed your shadow is off. Try making all the edges going one way or even picture a vanishing point. It should maake it look a lot cleaner bro trust me.
crits? not a fan of the y.
I can see that you are working with a permanent marker, I would suggest a pencil first.
yeah thats probably the worst S ive ever done haha. im sketching in pencil and outlining later, for visibility. but overall thanks for the crit,
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