I don't usually do the background like that, those times it was just cus I fucked up what I was trying to do with it. And yeah that fill in the second pic is pretty bad, i was experimenting but failed. I'll try to sketch up some better shit tonight to post
I really like the first one, but the second one not too much, change the background bro, but keep up the work!
Sucks to hear this but go simpler waze... you're getting ahead of youreself structure wise... which is the only real thing that matters in the toy bb section IMO.
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moganone- i only like the letters of the last one...u need to work on ur colors i think.
stussy- i like the style i think it would look crazy with some bright colors n a outline
"Austin Wells stated the books will be burned, the books will stay there...The letters have left the page!"- Rammellzee(style warz)
"I'm a simple man. All I want is enough sleep for two normal men, enough whiskey for three, and enough women for four."-Joel Rosenberg
lol? its the toy thread man. chill out. and how bout actually givin me a crit so that i can get better
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Stussy- I like it, i would make the letters solid and get rid of the arrows on the R
stussy- next time make sure the hookups are evened out, but dont take them out fully
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waze man ur doing the same exact shit i use to do u r gettin ahead of urself bad my dude it took me awhile to realize it to but ur not gonna get any better till u realize that. work on simples. no extensions no add ons no chips no arrows none of that stuff just pure letters then once u start to see some flow and bars in ur shit then start doing more complex shit
waze start over simple
amero i only see a M and E. throw away everything youve dont and start fresh and simple
fukew the E and W are ugly and it looks like your trying hard
fukew make the main bar in each letter go in the same direction to make it flow better. the letters arent bad on there own you just need to make them look good with eachother