s is lacking hardest.
comparatively speaking from last post to now id say its an improvement
my neck hurts from all these sideways pics... rotate before uploading people!
i dont know wtf is goin on with that S, and the middle of the E looks bad being boxy like that... the R should be more defined too, just looks like a whales ballsack or somethin lol try some different lines to make the R... go to the exchange thread if u need ideas
after this ive decided im just gonna write fuke
my biggest issue. a decent name thats original enough not to be on the net.
in reality i simply need drawing lessons, now where are all those handy little guides. i know they are here somewhere
fuck lessons lol i was thrown out of art class in 7th grade and never took art again... teach yo-self nicca!!!! haha... i like the name change fuke, it shows that ur maturing... the U in that piece is bad though i dunno how id change it... the fill isnt bad but seems to just be disguising uneven bars, at least its noticeable in the E
Zook: thanks for the help non overlapping 3d would look better i think also. i knew something looked kinda funky and i think thats one of the things.
Fakiee: Word I did mess up alot on it, but i know the concept just didn't execute. Thanks for pointing that out though
Fuke: not really feeling the U either but the fills pretty complex
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Time for a name cahnge need some crits though for some help never done c's or u's before so bear wit me lol.
Fuke im feelin that fill fo show.
meph-not too bad decent flow, id say pull the bend in the P an find a dif way to stylize,an drop the bend in the H.
vinnie-i like it cept the back bar of the K...cant put my finger on why.
fuke- id like to see the second pic redone with pencil or just the outline.
j687?-???new to graff thread PLEEAASE
an da pic.
haha yeah im afraid of losing letters to eachother, used to be a problem for me guess i over compensated.
much love for crits. ill be back with another try come night time.
kew - i liked the kas sketch better, but fuke is a better name
Meph - the structure on your E and P are lackin
nuck - looks solid cept for the little piece on the bottom of the C
Bime - is your M and E having sex?... didn't think so dooo nottt mash bars together like that
stotr - nice straight simps good work
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ps ignore the shitty hand
Edit: I just realized it's Bine not bime look down at your keyboard, does the N on there look anything like the one you drew? keep that right leg down
haha, i fucks wit' this. ^^^
nice n' clean.
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ignore that character.. i was too high to even see what i was drawing...lol
shem - im really liking yours, in the first one id try to fix that h like someone said. im really likin ur E's. they look dope. the second ones really good. id like to see it in color.
eat me -nice and clean. lookin good. sometimes i think simple is better
rtots - stick to making bars. the s and r are pretty crazy.
fuke - looks good, maybe make the f and u a bit bigger?
bine - try to move the N down so the second leg is touching the bottom. it looks kinda weird when its up there. i think it could look good if u kept the same thing but just worked on that N. your bars look pretty good to me.
anything for mine? kinda a quick sketch. the S and B are kinda weird. and idk if the B is really flowing with it at all.