Been off drawing letters for a couple months now, new adderall scrpit brought back my love for...well pretty much anything...so im gonna start workin at this again.
Started with this one. realized i was getting a little ahead of my self
so i tryed to go simpler...thank god for adderall i dont have the attn. span for this ish
So N & E are new letters for me to piece an i feel they hurtin the most, even though the b n i hurtin too
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bring them shits closer together man... a piece should be just that, a one-piece kinda thing... id stick to just black and white for a while too, or solid fills til u got the control to make some wilder fills, those fills just seem like u got ahead of urself.... god damn i wish i had some AD hah id be piecing all the time
thank yo much mane. An i agree with just goin black n white, I started doing that when i was getting good with letters, heh then lost intrest. N I didnt say anything about ADD, told my doc i had some test coming up, an he hooked it up.
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s is lacking hardest.
comparatively speaking from last post to now id say its an improvement
my neck hurts from all these sideways pics... rotate before uploading people!
i dont know wtf is goin on with that S, and the middle of the E looks bad being boxy like that... the R should be more defined too, just looks like a whales ballsack or somethin lol try some different lines to make the R... go to the exchange thread if u need ideas
says kas^
after this ive decided im just gonna write fuke
my biggest issue. a decent name thats original enough not to be on the net.
in reality i simply need drawing lessons, now where are all those handy little guides. i know they are here somewhere
fuck lessons lol i was thrown out of art class in 7th grade and never took art again... teach yo-self nicca!!!! haha... i like the name change fuke, it shows that ur maturing... the U in that piece is bad though i dunno how id change it... the fill isnt bad but seems to just be disguising uneven bars, at least its noticeable in the E
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...ead.php?t=2185
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Zook: thanks for the help non overlapping 3d would look better i think also. i knew something looked kinda funky and i think thats one of the things.
Fakiee: Word I did mess up alot on it, but i know the concept just didn't execute. Thanks for pointing that out though
Fuke: not really feeling the U either but the fills pretty complex
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Time for a name cahnge need some crits though for some help never done c's or u's before so bear wit me lol.
Fuke im feelin that fill fo show.
youtube.com/watch?v=jf83UmKUALI
meph-not too bad decent flow, id say pull the bend in the P an find a dif way to stylize,an drop the bend in the H.
vinnie-i like it cept the back bar of the K...cant put my finger on why.
fuke- id like to see the second pic redone with pencil or just the outline.
j687?-???new to graff thread PLEEAASE
an da pic.
cwits
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looks like youre scared to let your letters touch. i think you should let em get closer and make your letters just a little fatter. oh and the bottom right part of your n, bring that down, it looks bad that way bro.
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haha yeah im afraid of losing letters to eachother, used to be a problem for me guess i over compensated.
much love for crits. ill be back with another try come night time.
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Shadow and S are kinda blahh....Took like 3 minutes
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
kew - i liked the kas sketch better, but fuke is a better name
Meph - the structure on your E and P are lackin
nuck - looks solid cept for the little piece on the bottom of the C
Bime - is your M and E having sex?... didn't think so dooo nottt mash bars together like that
stotr - nice straight simps good work
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ps ignore the shitty hand
Edit: I just realized it's Bine not bime look down at your keyboard, does the N on there look anything like the one you drew? keep that right leg down
Last edited by PegCityBoy; 05-18-2010 at 11:31 PM.
haha, i fucks wit' this. ^^^
nice n' clean.
ignore that character.. i was too high to even see what i was drawing...lol
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