edit- double post
Last edited by StuttersDaily; 05-20-2010 at 08:38 PM.
3D's off on that first one homey. In particular.. the E. But, the A and the F look like they were started as a drop shadow???Originally Posted by BlacktodaFuture
tofe sucks.
Last edited by Inlyn08; 05-20-2010 at 08:34 PM.
struggling with the "r"
Last edited by StuttersDaily; 05-20-2010 at 08:37 PM.
yeah i fucked up on drop shadow. wasn't paying attention.
I'm not expecting you to care.. but..
struggling with the "r"
Someone on here writes STOTR.. and that is rather close. So...
Yeah..
Just throwing that out there.
Whatever man. Probably not near each other.
We also have different styles.
Make sure your U looks like a U though!
..and you can call me STOTTER.
Last edited by -Empty-Can-; 05-20-2010 at 10:14 PM.
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that 3d is dope... still not feelin the outline though
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I dig it fuke xcept for the K and the u is good but could be better
Try not having the bottom so stretched out and bring the top left out more
lol. Gg.whatever man. Probably not near each other.
We also have different styles.
Make sure your u looks like a u though!
..and you can call me stotter.
Fuke, you missed over 3 spots of 3-d on the E of the second peice. So dont listen to Zook. The lines are inconsistently set and the shading is off, so that throws off the 3-d even more. Its not too eratic, but those are just the small things that if they look right can bring everything together better. Also your outlines are fine. Id say good on the second one. Well spaced and clean.
Rape Babies.
safer, please stick with a style christ
clout where are u counting 3 spots? i only see one small spot and its at the bottom of the vertical bar, and the direction the 3d goes its debatable if it should even be there... biggest problem with the 3d is on the bottom of the K :-/ .... the middle bar on the E of the FIRST piece is the one thats missing
my bad, i meant he was missin 3d on the E of the first one. and the rest of my crits were for his second one.
Rape Babies.
Wouldn't it be better for him to try to develop more then one, being a "Toy" and all? Most writers are subject to numerous name changes, and various styles in their progression. Maybe one style will become more dominant and suitable. I agree, because I think you are trying to condone consistency. But, multiple styles as a "Toy" isn't a bad thing. Unless you are just artistically retarded..
Which.. yeah.
Last edited by Stuck; 05-22-2010 at 02:22 AM.
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