Agreed. Still need work.
R's are stressing me out like shit..
tofe did you even attempt fixing any of the things guyer told you?
keep it up tofe, theres improvement in parts that needed it. raise the top bar of your T to make it a capital on the gray straight, make them all capitals for now. dont bother connecting the top bar of your F with the E. dont bother filling it. id say it was a decent stop in an hour
the brown ones definatly the best. simple, but enough style to have a flow to it. outline just the outside of the letters, not the individual bars of the letter
that brown straight isnt bad at all. take that simple and adjust the 90 angle of the bottom bar on the E make it smooth and have a curve upwards of prolly only 30 degrees if you know what im sayin? itll smoothen it out and add more style to it. the TOF isnt bad. add little hooks NOT ARROWS but hooks to the bottom of the top bar on your T on both sides. try it out and post it back up and we'll see how it looks bro
Last edited by GuyGuyer of Guyland; 05-25-2010 at 10:30 PM.
stutter, make your bars less wobbly and more straight (lousy grammar, but it conveys my point). not straight straight, you dont need to go that far back. but put a curve into it an make it bend like if you took both ends of a pencil and bent it but not snappin it. try an use that bend for now until you can curve your letters more naturally and less spaghetti like. the bottom R if you had just one curve, then throw a circle on the top and have your kick coming out at a steeper angle, itd look a lot sharper
Last edited by GuyGuyer of Guyland; 05-25-2010 at 10:36 PM.
DONT COLOR THEM just do outlines, pen outlines. i cant emphasize enough how much this helped me advance my letters in a very short period of time
hey, youre not rasek. if im not him. no one is.
Yo tofe WHY DO YOU SUCK SOOO MUCH ASSS quit graff now please and thank you
Nice. I like the simpleness. Try and keep it straight though.
Devil face is niiiiiice, b's got a wicked shape too, Personally I like m's with square/cornered tops as oppesed to arches, but that's not to say I dislike it,
Dude you're guetting a little ahead of youreself with those extentions, but they kinda work on the M and B... that E is pretty horrid tho.
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good job tofe! mad improvement in a day. everythings coming together nicely, keep it up, youre getting the hang of it. each time you sketch out a piece, it gets a little better. practice makes perfect. soon you'll be able to take your old shit and incorporate certain ting tingys that you like onto those simples and youre on a roll. nicely done
Tofe i like that except for the hump on the T and the ant those little chunks that are missing from the F and E
Etcha That E could use some work and although i like the B, i don't really feel like its flowin.