Nice. I like the simpleness. Try and keep it straight though.
Devil face is niiiiiice, b's got a wicked shape too, Personally I like m's with square/cornered tops as oppesed to arches, but that's not to say I dislike it,
Dude you're guetting a little ahead of youreself with those extentions, but they kinda work on the M and B... that E is pretty horrid tho.
SHOOT THE MOON!!
good job tofe! mad improvement in a day. everythings coming together nicely, keep it up, youre getting the hang of it. each time you sketch out a piece, it gets a little better. practice makes perfect. soon you'll be able to take your old shit and incorporate certain ting tingys that you like onto those simples and youre on a roll. nicely done
Tofe i like that except for the hump on the T and the ant those little chunks that are missing from the F and E
Etcha That E could use some work and although i like the B, i don't really feel like its flowin.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Originally Posted by testing.
tofe- thats one of ur best simples iv seen i like the colors too
emb- i like everything but the E to jst make it taller n take of the extension
cheers for the crits guys.
I see what you mean about the E. It is rather ugly.
I take it you are all refering to the bottom extension of the E. Ill sort that out. It just looks rather plain in that area without it and makes the E look to small. Not to sure what to do with it.
Ill draw one without and get it up.
make your E as tall as your B brotha. you got a sideways triangle thing goin on with the height of your letters
Bricks neeeeed to go, needs colour and I'm not entirely happy with that W if anyone has any advise?
the top part of the E is way to far down
Fuck off.
you forgot the bottom left part of your W on the inside of your A. thats why it looks wierd. and it wont be as thick as the bottom right part of your W. and as leaks said. the top part of your E dosent look too good crowding the middle bar of your E. you could probably add a fin to the top bar of the E without having to raise it. maybe add an extension on the left side of your A if you wanna balance it with a fin on the top of your E ya know?
Guy,thanks for all the crits you have been giving me.
^fucked up doing the shadow of the f over the e...
Bottom picture, I like the last two Tofe, except the E in the first one last picture & the t in the bottom one last picture
Newest, needs a fill and a background. Sloppy 3D, any other crits or suggestions?
Old, top one needs color, but I didn't think it was worth it.
Last edited by 2FNK?; 05-26-2010 at 06:06 PM.
AWE, if you fix your w, don't connect it to the E how you have it. It doesn't really go with the rest of it, and I know you can think up something better.
Plus, your W could use to be behind your A or in front of it. Same with the W and the E. For now, simples. Let each letter consistently either always be in front of or behind the next one.
some random shit i been drawin in school, I ran out of space for the O and had to staple together another piece of paper
Haha thepekins, I did the same thing up with tape. If you want some crits, then work on the letter spacing. Size of letters is consistent, and your bars are good for the most part. Sick shit though, keep at it.
That's someone else named WAZE, so I don't think I'd put the 1 on the end. But that's just me...
No! NOT SICK SHIT.
I was just trying to throw in a compliment so I didn't sound like an asshole with nothing but crits. Haha. But your right, I shouldn't give him a big head.
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