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    i like it, though if i were you i would take out the dot over the j, and also change the lower bar of the z, it seems like it doesnt match with the rest.

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    lol this thread is hopeless. if you have to ask crits for straight up keyboard letters, you're trollin. seriously. it's all been said before, use bars, cleaner lines, etc.

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    TOFE- O needs work in the second one, why's it different than the rest yo' letters. E needs a middle line in the 3rd one...
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    constructive crits on this? I wouldn't consider myself a toy, but I know I'm not good enough to post in the normal blackbook thread. intermediate maybe?

    zbre

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    pretty dope style their
    zbre!

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    Last edited by RedEyes; 06-07-2010 at 07:00 PM.

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    angle the two vertical bars on the A more towards each other, so the intersect more. and the LT looks like it's angle more upwards then the PA. make sure all your letters are angled in the same direction. and the rounded top part of the P is too skinny. yo?

    *edit. sorry, these crits don't really make sense seeing as you changed your image.
    Last edited by Hearr!; 06-07-2010 at 08:12 PM.

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    red eyes: watch your structre/flow on that S.
    zbre: i like that style, really original. Just be careful with that R. Wasn't able to really tell whether it was an R or a X. And that Z can be mistaken for a lower case E.
    tofe: better but work on flow and just because you are using bars doesn't mean you are using letter structure. watch where you are putting them.
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    whats with those triangles your putting in every letter? all the letters need work but i say focus mainly on the a and r and e for now

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    Safe that a looks gross, the F doesnt go out far enough, and the e goes too far. PS No ones gonna suck your dick
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    The A is gross. i agree. i've been working on a few different ones.
    the triangle things on every single letter is called flow. (doing the same thing to each letter making it consistent, like how the bottom of the S is balancing out the bottom of the E) and the F is more hidden then the E bc an F can easily be mistaken for an E. trying to make it more prominent to being an F and different. still got a few kinks to work out. thx for the crits though.
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    Uploaded with ImageShack.us
    any crits appreciated

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hearr! View Post
    constructive crits on this? I wouldn't consider myself a toy, but I know I'm not good enough to post in the normal blackbook thread. intermediate maybe?

    zbre
    i really like this. only thing i would say is tweak the R a bit
    Fuck off.

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    leaks........ ur a fuckin gangster

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    no im not.....
    Fuck off.

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    pen freestyle its fuke backwards

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    Didnt you post this on the intermediate thread a while back and get hated on for your style ?
    The F in the pen one is an E and the K has too random tail/ extensions
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    Quote Originally Posted by Inlyn08 View Post
    To be honest, that K doesn't look like a K at all. More like a down syndrome X.
    this made me lol.


    @4ENOD i really like this a lot
    @FUKE i'm not really diggin' the fill on the second one, too busy and takes away from the letters


    here's an update, rounded out a lot the letters and added a shadow. I know it's still simple letters, but i'd rather get it right at the base level than develop bad habits and screw myself over down the road.



 

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