kilts you got the right idea, get some good solid letters before you start doing wildstyle shit dont listen to 4HER although exploring some cant hurt just keep doing what your doing and if might look a lil better if you reducded the bar length of the bottom of the L just a tiny bit
Originally Posted by flask1995
or you can use like those paint roller things to tag high spots where no one can't tag besides with a ladder.
and you can make a little bonfire with the paint brush's while your trying to get the spot77 CREW
kilts- your on the right track definately
yap- its not awful but i hate that style
zewl- that second one has potential but simplify it a bit. a lot of the add ons are pointless. make the middle two bars of the W thicker. it makes it have too much negative space otherwise
Last edited by RES4; 06-09-2010 at 02:37 PM.
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
Excellent pen work, dude. You've got some nice letters. Just try and bring that extension between the P and the K down a little bit so it's not too much higher than the other letters. Tuck it if you have to.
I think that second one is ready for painting. No doubt about it.
Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!
Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.
hopefully i will get painting a bit in a few weeks. exams are over on the 24th of june so hopefully i'l get some painting done then
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
I hear ya, man. Get your grind on, then get your shine on.
You got a solid head on your shoulders.
Outta' respect I smash wack toys; put 'em out their misery and send 'em to that upper room. Knock! Knock! Who? Death, mothafucka'! BOOM!
Before I bang, I go and get high, homey.
thanks man
the top one is another i might paint
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
been writing for a couple of months now, new on bs
Zane
Kezu
your not gonna like to hear this but...
its awful
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
Jenkem.
i wont blame it on my pens or some shit, but can you tell me what I could improve with them? and if they are both complete shit, I can handle that too, can only make me better.
to be perfectly honest theres nothing you can improve. you need to go way simpler, keyboard letters.
youve got the right attitude though
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
thanks, and yeah I just meant advice in general, so yeah
Sorry that it's a bad picture but yeah it does kinda suck. I'm just happy I've advanced this far!
Kezu- Keep it simple for a bit.
Aspek- That shit's real nice and clean. Looks fresh. Can't find flaws :P
Double post
Paint the bottom one. Period. Throw a sexy fill in it. Or just do white. Just paint it.thanks man
the top one is another i might paint
Zane- simple letters, drop the extensions, work on your 3d, let it run over the letter under it if your gonna do it on the right side. It's easier just to do it on the left so you can work on letter spacing too, just fyi.
UHOH- your o looks like shit. no offense. work on your letter width for right now and keep it consistent, cut the weird ass bubbles coming off your letters out. Your 3d is off on your O. I'd just do simple top and left bars for now, when you get good at those, then work on straightviews (the shit you attempted). For now, just use a simple outline, not the puddle looking thing.
Summary for both of you: SIMPLES!
Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-09-2010 at 09:22 PM.
UHOH go simpler looks eh
aspek sexy as hell. dont like that PK extention though
havent been on here in a minute, shit.
some stuff, havent really been writing/practicing lately but whatever
i dont condone illegal activity, anything i post on bombingscience is a lie.
some shit I did for an exchange on our local messageboard...
"Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
here,im feelin that as usual,but i think it would look better if u didnt have that arrow coming out your e and make it the same as the other one,the arrows dont look bad,i just think it would look a lot better without them
average- that outline on the epic looks slopy,and the a on the otherone looks bad
roes - the throwy is lookin better.. keep working on the r and s
aspek - the one with the red clouds looks dope man
ive been slow on the drawing lately,getting really boring..i need to get out and paint..
^ i know i spelled science wrong..the f and t im kinda dissapointed with,and next time i wont make the e so tall
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