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    Quote Originally Posted by kew1 View Post
    bump for critz. says smog

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2FNK? View Post
    I agree with FV, and your b needs a lottta work.
    its not so much the b cause that was just an accidental fuck up i need to work on my R's'

    Quote Originally Posted by kew1 View Post
    bump for critz. says smog
    your M looks like and E your O looks like the number 8 o.o
    Last edited by TheBoredOne; 06-16-2010 at 10:51 AM.

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    ima redraw it to do a bigger piece with colors...crits and tips are DEEPLY appreciated!!!


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    i just realized the 3d is way off on the k




    any crits would be greatly appreciated

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    mfatik- top one lose the awkword bend in the right leg of the a and bring the middle bar over and connect it.
    bottom one you got more unneccessary extenstions and you need to make the left leg of the a connect to the right one at the top.

    Meph-my tip, dont mess it up

    kew- dude that shit was like one the top of the last page, i didn't not get crits because nobody saw it...we all saw it it didn't get crits cause nobody was tripping face on mushrooms. Im gonna go with whoever said it just looks like a bunch of boomerangs shaded at diffrent levels...thats my crit.
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    ^ is that a compliment or an insult

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    its definitely an overkill. i saw the S and after looking HARD i saw the G.
    Fuck off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheBoredOne View Post
    its not so much the b cause that was just an accidental fuck up
    Isn't every fuck up accidental haha?

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    Yeah, kew, you're definitely trying to hard on that one. The structure just isn't there. Stick to working with bars until you understand proportions, then shoot for a more advanced style.

    Meph, I'd definitely rework your E on the top one and play around with the layout of the pieces around your letters before you make a final colored one. The car looks pretty good, but I'd work on getting the letters in the smoke to be the same sizes too.

    Mfatik, on the top one, those kinks in your letters make the entire thing look kinda awkward, but nice job keeping the letters proportionate. I'd stay away from overlapping like you did on your F and on the left side of your M though. On the bottom one, stay away from disconnecting portions of letters like your A and also don't connect your letters like you did on your M and F. Aside from that, I'd bring your letters closer together and don't be afraid to overlap.

    Here's a sketch I finished last night for a buddy of mine (his idea lol):

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    thats kinda gay
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    Haha true that. That's not really graffiti... the only thing that makes it resemble it is the drop shadow you put on it, which you kinda fucked up hard on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2FNK? View Post
    Haha true that. That's not really graffiti... the only thing that makes it resemble it is the drop shadow you put on it, which you kinda fucked up hard on.
    Lol, judging by your sketch, I'd doubt you're educated enough to point out where I fucked up on the drop shadow... go ahead, I'd love to see.

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    I circled just a few places. Sorry if it's hard to see. I probably messed up a few places anyways.
    And yeah, I might be toy, but I can still see when something isn't right.

    You already posted this before when it was pretty simple with basically just the letters and character,
    did you expect to receive respect on a graffiti forum for the shit in the background or something?

    No hate to you or what you did.. I just don't get why you posted it here on this forum, or why on this thread?
    Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-16-2010 at 04:01 PM.

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    out of all those you circled i see 1 true mistake.

    cool your ego and work on your own shit.
    Fuck off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2FNK? View Post
    Isn't every fuck up accidental haha?
    some fuck ups are on purpose :P

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    My ego is cooled Leaks.

    My bad for being a dick B SQUARED.

    Just been in a shitty mood today.
    Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-16-2010 at 04:39 PM.

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    Nice character man haha.

    Yeah, I know I fucked up the bars.
    Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-16-2010 at 10:56 PM.

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    2FNK?- you have to many crooked lines going..i suggest making your letter thicker and getting your 3d together.

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    Yeah, I was thinking that too. Thanks for the crits.


 

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