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    ^ is that a compliment or an insult

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    its definitely an overkill. i saw the S and after looking HARD i saw the G.
    Fuck off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheBoredOne View Post
    its not so much the b cause that was just an accidental fuck up
    Isn't every fuck up accidental haha?

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    Yeah, kew, you're definitely trying to hard on that one. The structure just isn't there. Stick to working with bars until you understand proportions, then shoot for a more advanced style.

    Meph, I'd definitely rework your E on the top one and play around with the layout of the pieces around your letters before you make a final colored one. The car looks pretty good, but I'd work on getting the letters in the smoke to be the same sizes too.

    Mfatik, on the top one, those kinks in your letters make the entire thing look kinda awkward, but nice job keeping the letters proportionate. I'd stay away from overlapping like you did on your F and on the left side of your M though. On the bottom one, stay away from disconnecting portions of letters like your A and also don't connect your letters like you did on your M and F. Aside from that, I'd bring your letters closer together and don't be afraid to overlap.

    Here's a sketch I finished last night for a buddy of mine (his idea lol):

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    thats kinda gay
    OHKER 24
    DIRTIER THEN YOUR DAD'S BROWSING HISTORY

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    Haha true that. That's not really graffiti... the only thing that makes it resemble it is the drop shadow you put on it, which you kinda fucked up hard on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2FNK? View Post
    Haha true that. That's not really graffiti... the only thing that makes it resemble it is the drop shadow you put on it, which you kinda fucked up hard on.
    Lol, judging by your sketch, I'd doubt you're educated enough to point out where I fucked up on the drop shadow... go ahead, I'd love to see.

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    I circled just a few places. Sorry if it's hard to see. I probably messed up a few places anyways.
    And yeah, I might be toy, but I can still see when something isn't right.

    You already posted this before when it was pretty simple with basically just the letters and character,
    did you expect to receive respect on a graffiti forum for the shit in the background or something?

    No hate to you or what you did.. I just don't get why you posted it here on this forum, or why on this thread?
    Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-16-2010 at 04:01 PM.

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    out of all those you circled i see 1 true mistake.

    cool your ego and work on your own shit.
    Fuck off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 2FNK? View Post
    Isn't every fuck up accidental haha?
    some fuck ups are on purpose :P

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    My ego is cooled Leaks.

    My bad for being a dick B SQUARED.

    Just been in a shitty mood today.
    Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-16-2010 at 04:39 PM.

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    Nice character man haha.

    Yeah, I know I fucked up the bars.
    Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-16-2010 at 10:56 PM.

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    2FNK?- you have to many crooked lines going..i suggest making your letter thicker and getting your 3d together.

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    Yeah, I was thinking that too. Thanks for the crits.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thepekins View Post
    bottom page bump

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    Quote Originally Posted by DeadManWalking View Post
    You mean all the connections? when i first drew it the letters seemed too far apart so i filled in some connections.
    When your letters seem too far apart, bring them closer together. Don't fill it with extensions, that just kind of puts a highlight on where you made a mistake.
    They're called extensions because they extend one letter into another, they don't just randomly connect two letters. I need to quit using extensions myself, I'm too toy to pull it off.

    By the way, on that second sketch keep your letters the same size.

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    meph- looks good it would look good with a fill, more than just one color you know. Whats up with the thing below the M

    2FNK-your 3-D is all over the place. I like that style of thin crooked letter like you got gong but it definitly needs work, and I would drop the connections you got going with the top of the letters for now

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    the letters is like a display of a turbo. the M is piping connecting to an intercooler ( the lines under the M) the E is just piping connecting to the turbo which is a P and the H is piping connecting to the blow off valve.

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    my girlfriend did it...lego guy came out sick



 

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