flippin chickens i liked the folds better than the simple one
flippin chickens i liked the folds better than the simple one
Originally Posted by TheToy
HaHa now im always gonna think that too
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
fucked up on the t
TOFE: I like your original throws better, they are fresh.
Werm: Straighten out your bars, its all wobbly and they are all different sizes, just go a bit simpler and you will be good to go.
Pic for talking.. Did it last night
Can I get some crits on it? Go easy :P
The style is there, but ur got some weird bends and to many random extensions, try sketching this over as a solid piece, then add some bits.
Tofe the O in that bottom one is too small for the other letters.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
I mean, you write chad.
Via UrbanDictionary.com:
Chad-
A stereotypical asshole jock.
http://chad.urbanup.com/2135963
lulzA Chad can be identified by his appearance which usually consists of the following: mesh trucker hat, frosted hair, greasy spiked hair, polo shirt with the collar turned up, fake tan, ringer t-shirt two sizes too small, pants two sizes too small, wifebeater in public, and a light colored button-up shirt.
my best friend is named chad. he wears polos sometimes
"Misconceptions and assumptions are the breeding ground for ignorance"
my fuck. after seeing those last two pics i want to cut myself knowing you actually paint. i pity the motherfucker that has to look at your wack ass shit. take notes from the homie flippingchickens up top on this page. maybe he can guide you to some style, toy.
lol.
can you guys give me critsz on my works of graffiti?
im trying to step my game up like a pro-writer.
please dont be too harsh. not sure if i could take it...
seriously.
keanu - if ur gonna paint make sure its somewhere abandoned,dont be disrespecting the trains your not on the right level to be painting them..the black and white dont look bad,take off the extension coming up the top of the a..the n looks wierd on the right half,and i cant really tell but looks like the u is lower than everyother letter..the throwy on paper looks completely biten,not to mention it got no flow it just got a bunch of cirlces in the bottom..looks retarded..i like the coloring on the yellow and orange k..keep it simple and stay away from the freights
stel - i like the 3d on the s,t,e and the black purple shading came out good..but i sujest u remove the arrows and skinny extensions inside your letters,that s would have been dope if it didnt pop out to the left on the top and if it didnt have that skiny thing at the bottom and that arrow popping out..the t is dope,but what happen to the 3d? the e is nice but dont do what u did to the bottom,it looks wierd..i say work on everything i told u and work on making a new l,cuz im not feelin that one to be honest
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 06-21-2010 at 03:12 AM.
keanu,just dont listen to flipping..id rather see your stuff on trains than his whck shit.
your on your way..i simply wouldnt do the wired a n u connection..maybe go with a simple small but capital n..to match the e..
Last edited by lord_plankton; 06-21-2010 at 03:55 AM.
shut ur mouth faget i dont paint freights
dont listen to anybody on this page. these ones are good
Parking spaces are just like woman.. The good ones are always taken, so when no one is looking, slip into a disabled one
Keanu: Just make your N and A more visible and you're golden.
PM me for slap in the face trades
Haha some douchebag kid at my school with a high voice always calls people faggots.
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Keanu- you got steez that no one else in this thread has, keep up the good work and just fix that A, i thought it was an R at first. your painting is pretty clean as well.
fucked up on the t
Thanks for the critsz TOFE. i think yr sketch would have been good if you didnt fuck up on the T like you said. thanks for trying to teach me the rules though. would you like to be my graffiti sensei? i usually dont paint unless its something bigger that people can see you know...but i do paint smaller stuff....here ill post some so you know more accurately where im at, and then we can talk about where i need to improve, okay?
i painted this on plywood.
this is on a "hopper" i think its called. i know you said not to, my bad.
my friend saver from adhd crew nyc, and i, that was a great night!
this night we dissed people
this night my friend taught me how to "eat up fills"
this is a sticker on a police van in nyc
this is a big tag that i painted in nyc
sometimes i also write the name "KERNS" i know i should wait to paint...
this is a "straight letter" i think is what its called, it says KERNS.
wish i had a bigger picture.
this is my KERNS throw...i know it needs mad work.
this is a tag that i painted, it says REEVES, like KEANU REEVES haha!
i also painted this on plywood for practice
i painted this on a highway for fun.
i painted this on a highway too. i know its really bad.
this is a piece i tried to be abstract with...its obviously not done.
these are just a bunch of outlines, trackside. no big deal.
but like i said, the big stuff get my blood pumping. this is on a highway in nyc
this is pretty big, trackside.
and this is on a highway also.
i painted this on a highway too, i love going big near highways. i should wait to get my style up though.
i dont take flicks of all the things i paint, because i heard that was stupid to do. because of the jake, or the piggies.
so TOFE, i took my time to show you my stuff, so you could get a general idea of the things i "try" to do. if you could take a few minutes out of your day and let me know how you think i could improve my game. that would be great. thanks for your time. sorry for taking up so much space in the thread with words and big pictures!
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