this is what i came up with after i took some sleeping pills. it didnt turn out so good lol.
St3vo- Your N is really the only letter i like out of that piece, i think you're bending your bars too much and it just doesnt seem to flow well
Tofe- Your first sketch is probably the best, keep tweeking your simples to make em pop
Cyto- im not really a fan, if you hadnt posted what it said i probably wouldnt be able to read it. The end ER are good to me but the beginning just seems too forced and im not feeling it. 3d and lines are good but the lines look like they bled a bit. I suggest using ballpoint pens or a "Vellum Writer", Your blue and white one is tight tho
BrG- I think you should go back too bars, your letters arent structurized well enough
Abe- I think you're trying to go for a style thats a little too complex, not saying you cant pull it off but you'll probably need to keep practicing
i think i'm all caught up on crits for you guys now throw em my way lol. AAAAAAAAAAnd you guys should post more if you wanna get better. Naw im sayinnn?
You got straight letters down although I'm not a big fan of the blocks on the top of your A and the left bar of your M. But you obviously know how to use your bars. Throw some style into that shit
sorry for the over sized pics forgot to re-size them and got lazy to fix it
yank im feeling those, nice and simple but you should resize so i dont need to scroll to see them all lol
and yeah St3vo im tryin to stylize my bars thats why im adding stupid blocks but it doesnt seem to work that great haha
Bend em. You can only do so much with perfectly straight bars. Don't do too much like I did with those E's cuz that looks like hell haha. I'll do an actual piece with my regular letters and post that. Gonna have to go nab some pencils tho, I've been using pens for everything recently and it's a bitch
Sketches I did in Drivers ed real quickkkkkk
little bit newer then the other ones that i have posted snew my man with the hot fingers me doing a throw for him, UB Unified Brothers, cell phone pick of my yank done a little while ago but still i like it well the fill, and re-sized the pics
Yank that green one is fierce. You made a wicked fill using one color
heres my attempt at bending... I think the A may be bitten, i remember i used to draw it all the time in my notebooks at school but i dont remember if i came up with it on my own or not lol. So if its bitten my bad. Not feeling the A anyways it just doesnt fit with this piece
patch, we should exchange so i have somethin to practice from, your simps are wut i need to b doin, helpa fellow out^^
i kindda like it mak the k doesnt flow with the m but if you make it a little fatter like the m then it will and bend it to if you want i will do an name exchange with you so i can show you what i mean and i feel that style to its diffrent the a is trash tho try to make it a little simpler so it flows a bit more
yeah im down for an exchange. I probably wont have it done til the end of the weekend tho cause im pretty busy with work but hit me up with a pm
chek da exchange thread.
Abe, not liking it. All of the letters being connected like that make it look like a jumbled mess. That K is seriously lacking, that backwards R threw me off for a P or something, and that hole in the D seems too small. No hate or anything, just pointing out what I don't like.
Last edited by PREA672; 07-08-2010 at 12:00 PM.
that's got mad potential shem, keep working with it and see how many lines you can get rid of and still read it, diggin the abstractness of it