Abe, not liking it. All of the letters being connected like that make it look like a jumbled mess. That K is seriously lacking, that backwards R threw me off for a P or something, and that hole in the D seems too small. No hate or anything, just pointing out what I don't like.
Last edited by PREA672; 07-08-2010 at 11:00 AM.
that's got mad potential shem, keep working with it and see how many lines you can get rid of and still read it, diggin the abstractness of it
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abe it looks pretty good but the R is kinda weak, im not a fan of backwards letters tho
Grim i think it could look good but the R and I arent doing it for me, you should
Shem im really digging that except for the E, i just dont really like that curve at the top
Anyways i did this today, a simple... yet again lol. Rocked Yank's style for the A
Patch: Really liking that! Maybe could do something even better with the K?
Heres some new stuff from sweden, my first drawing so go easy on me
And a lil' throwie.
Last edited by filur; 07-08-2010 at 10:40 PM.
that throw isnt bad but on the piece you need to try and keep all your bars the same width and it'd probably come out looking better, also try not to have the U overlap the bottom of the L so much, and you should round the R because most of your bars are curved so it'd just flow better. And dont worry about arrows and extensions, they're over rated anyways. I know it sounds like im being hard on you but im just tryng to help out
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Other than the arrows I like the first one a lot filur.
Is this cute?
filur-why is the hole so small on the R? fix that NOW!!
Gatsoi-if that says grim...well i just can hardly read it....go for a more clean look
Thanks guys, Ill keep that in mind
Went a wee bit simpler here, wot you guys think?
yeah gatsoi that looks more like it says Groy or somthing. your I overlaps too much
TOFE- stick to simple, no extension peices , I mean really everytime you try and add flare to your shit it fails miserably. All your stuff is awkward and not pleasant to look at. Just work on those letters man.
MEko- awesome, TOFE needs to get influenced from the work you've been putting out, your stuff is so legit.
and here's something that's unfinished.. can't figure out what I want to do with the R and what to use as a fill.