Blackbooks

**xXABEONEXx** · 07-07-2010 11:37 PM

chek da exchange thread.

**xXABEONEXx** · 07-08-2010 03:10 AM

quick simp..

**shem** · 07-08-2010 04:24 AM

**Sbal** · 07-08-2010 10:33 AM

Abe, not liking it. All of the letters being connected like that make it look like a jumbled mess. That K is seriously lacking, that backwards R threw me off for a P or something, and that hole in the D seems too small. No hate or anything, just pointing out what I don't like.

**PREA672** · 07-08-2010 10:37 AM

nsakrew.

**dinedgc** · 07-08-2010 10:50 AM

that's got mad potential shem, keep working with it and see how many lines you can get rid of and still read it, diggin the abstractness of it

**Gatsoi** · 07-08-2010 11:36 AM

Crits?

**xXABEONEXx** · 07-08-2010 03:51 PM

back 2 th drawin bord....lol

*Patch! · 07-08-2010 09:53 PM

abe it looks pretty good but the R is kinda weak, im not a fan of backwards letters tho
Grim i think it could look good but the R and I arent doing it for me, you should
Shem im really digging that except for the E, i just dont really like that curve at the top

Anyways i did this today, a simple... yet again lol. Rocked Yank's style for the A

**filur** · 07-08-2010 10:16 PM

Patch: Really liking that! Maybe could do something even better with the K?

Heres some new stuff from sweden, my first drawing so go easy on me

And a lil' throwie.

*Patch! · 07-08-2010 11:14 PM

that throw isnt bad but on the piece you need to try and keep all your bars the same width and it'd probably come out looking better, also try not to have the U overlap the bottom of the L so much, and you should round the R because most of your bars are curved so it'd just flow better. And dont worry about arrows and extensions, they're over rated anyways. I know it sounds like im being hard on you but im just tryng to help out