tofe-that e is wack
Meko-clean piece, that throwish piece with a cross in the O is sick, go paint that
anyonefeelin this throwie?
tofe-that e is wack
Meko-clean piece, that throwish piece with a cross in the O is sick, go paint that
anyonefeelin this throwie?
^the one across the bottom is tight
fuck you zen
slek - blue one is tight,but fix the e
shem - that looks tight,but the only thing im not feelin is the 3d on the s going down the page so much,still it looks different and thats good,keep working with it..
tofe- for once i like it
make this one a lowercase e, get rid of the tf connection and curve the f more to match the tOriginally Posted by FlippingChickens
on the second blue one lose the connection and make the e smaller and your good
5min simple ....tofe if you gave your self advice you would be better.
idk401- The letters and drop shadow are great. I think maybe the shading on the inside of the letters could be blended alittle more though
Flippingchickens- Try not to cover your 'O' so much, start by getting rid of the connection between the T and F. The E seems to be the letter your having trouble with, try messing around with a lowercase 'e' or a capital 'E' thats not as curvy
Some stuff I did for my friend...
and some stuff of my own...
Crits?
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief I do not participate or condone any acts of graffiti or vandilisim
Yeaahh man. Thats what im talkin about, nice and simple, Love this.slek - blue one is tight,but fix the e
shem - that looks tight,but the only thing im not feelin is the 3d on the s going down the page so much,still it looks different and thats good,keep working with it..
thanks fresk!
Last edited by FlippingChickens; 07-14-2010 at 11:24 AM.
not sure at all how to post shit but heres some pages hopefully
not sure to how post shit at all but heres some pages hopefully
GET YOUR BARS UP.
taht TOFE throwie is dopeee.
last 3 i have done
have at em Xo) lol
Twyst- the flic in the middle has the most potential. the first one I couldnt really read untill I saw your others. On the last, dont connect the letters, and the twists are kind of odd on some spots...only really works on the T I guess. Stick with keyboard letters like in your second flic for now, dont overlap them so much.
Tofe- the orange and yellow simple is looking alot better, try not to make your E bigger than the other letters. The throw in the same flic is good.
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief I do not participate or condone any acts of graffiti or vandilisim
I think that they both look really nice but to me the E in the first one is weak and the S in the second one is weak so if you had the E from the second in the first as well and the S from the first in the second as well they it would be really well put together. Would love to see some sketches cleaned up!Some new stuff. Need to clean this shit lol
Gum - that's a sweet throwie it really flows and the letters play off eachother very well. Keep it up!
Tofe - Your throwie in that last picture is really really clean I guess the only advice I could give you there would be to scoot the O a little to the left because it feels like it should have a gap between it and the T in that one. And you're handstyle is good too just don't like the halo they almost never do it for me.
SEAZ
here goes...
let me know if this is the wrong place...
crits?
buuump. Meko. we should date.a couple of new things... that blue tag has been burn for 3 years now lol was shock when i seen it still up haha...and for the exchange with RESN its not finished but ill post it any way....
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Originally Posted by Vagrant
Meka ur inta the tramping lifestyle? My opinion of you just went way up.
Kinda fucked up on everything.
blah double post
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