tofe_ yes! man keep workin' on it, good progression. that gumwad piece needs wallspace if you clean up your T, and maybe chop off the little top nubbin.
misoe_ I like both of these, they have merit but I feel liek your getting distracted by details. The I in your first one could be just a rectangle, with no dot, anyway it needs a little tweaking. I do not liek how your second M gets smaller on the bottom. love that "fresh gang" lettering, under the second one.
seyr_ get those letters nice and consistent and you will have a great starting point. once you've got a few sketches of those and all the bars are pretty even you can start to think on how you want to warp them.
b squared_ dude, sooo retro i almost didn't like it, then i realized it was mad clean and the steez was all consistent, thumbs up.
tofe- i like the top siple up on the first one a lot and i think the second one would look a lot better if you do straight letters and keep the pink O as is, i see you getting better with those two styles
misoe- i dig everything on the first one except the i, looks a little squished in, and the character on the second is straight.
just eating shit with letters, got bored of my tag trying to create a new one, help me with crits pleaaaase..
I like the character. Def need to work on my characters.
something i need help with...tryin to figure out what im gunna put on a 24x30 canvas...as ma summer art proj.
Misoe-nice drips on the first one they'r dope
that piece is terrible. introduce yourself to simples. and make your sig smaller. thats fucking annoying
we gota stop beating around the bush.
all the kids are guna jock him haha. everybodies guna ask him to do their name. lulz
HOLY SHIT THE MOON HAS SKI GOGGLES AND A PAINT RESPIRATOR ON!!!!1!! THAT IS SO HXC
Last edited by LeaksOne; 07-21-2010 at 03:33 PM.
zooyook, i wouldnt of joined the 'E' and 'R' i dont think it looks right, but that's my opinion,
also not sure about the wavey part of the 'O' it dosent fit in with the rest i also feel
that's a piece of my anme i worked on, took em a couple of hrs, and i'd like peoples ideas on it
yo leaks.... thats y i like this site cause people straight out say "u suck"... it makes ya wanna get better... hearin "your good" makes ya cocky an makes u feel like a piece of shit when u know u suck... kids in ma grade think this skaterkid is tha bomb an i suck... the kid bites of some internet base wildstyle horribly an cant even make block letters himself... i do suck, but atleast i aint as bad as him...