Blackbooks

[extinct]

... crits... after all i am a toy... no shit

[extinct]

fail tag at bottom... srry i waz lazy

[LeaksOne]

With a fail piece on top. Introduce yourself to simples. Hopefully the two of you Get along well.

[weakfingers]

what he said.


Took a break from drawing for abit and now im just messing around with things.

[SicK-]

Can i get some critsssss?

[iamBoZ96]

ive seen this like 3 times

[Baron]

Flipping chickens, pics 2 & 4 are good, keep working with that style.
Redux, I'm digging the backwards R on the throws and the pen piece at the bottom is ill but it seems like your X isn't quite going with the style of the piece.

First sketches in more than a few months, trying to get my steez back.



Edit- Isn't it still "Give crits to get crits"?

[SicK-]

ASPEK-Like always your stuff is really clean, and your structure is great, i dont like the p though
REDUX-I like those, Alot actually, bottom one in my opinion is definitly better
Nickstix- The thing goin on with the E and A kills the whole thing for me
TOFE-i still doesnt seem like your listening to the crits you get, 2nd picture last on is best work with that, but i love your throwie
SBAL-what can i say, just keep practicing, look at alot of photos of graff and practice

Bottom page bump

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

it's awesome when u have a dad who makes over 10k per painting

hey check out what's just chillin in my hallway



this painting got picked out of like 800 other bay area artists to be in a figure contest, unfortunatly he didn't win.

[Meph*]

Baron- i think if u even out the bars on the first one it'll look sick.


i know the coloring isnt that good, please leave crits anyways

[Phillip McDougall]

@Cyto
That's fucking rad.

[filur]

Meph - I love those ideas!

[Meph*]

thanks I've been working at it all day

[4HER]

Extinct - Could write an essay on what's wrong with that piece but.....
remember, anyone can colour in. You really need to study other letters a lot, then apply parts of what you see. Draw your letters and keep working and reworking and reworking them until youre really happy with them. Then you can think about colours.

Weakfingers - I'm a big fan of your throwies. Never been able to do them so well myself. Big props

Meph* - There's nothin wrong with the colouring, its just that the whole page has no depth. You really need to work into it, making parts darker and lighter. That top piece looks like its supposed to be 3d, but you cant tell cos theres no shadow or sheen on it.

[2FNK?]

[drums]

meph i like your idea of the IC turbo and BOV on your IC piping letters but you need to at least make sure those pipes look round to make it look right when its are finished

[extinct]

Extinct - Could write an essay on what's wrong with that piece but.....
remember, anyone can colour in. You really need to study other letters a lot, then apply parts of what you see. Draw your letters and keep working and reworking and reworking them until youre really happy with them. Then you can think about colours.

Thanks for the advice.. ive been playin around with a small e an a whole lot of random stuff... so here iz a small quick <i dont know> (gatta keep practicing)
crits an tips plz

[drums]

crits from a toy (me)...
i like the reflection and 3d but the letters could use some more...i duno...style? put more time into the letters and less on the background shit

[extinct]

thanks man... im kinda thinkin of jus spammin "Q" every where instead of eqs but still...
pce

[nickstix]

extinct- You have some cool ideas but wait on that stuff for awhile and just work on letters. Using bars sketch letters that look like how they do on your keyboard. For instance the top bars on your e dont line up right. and the top right section of the s the 3d should be overlapping the main letter. Also i didnt get that the thing in the middle was a Q untill I saw your tag. Tag needs some work, go simpler. Keep sketching


Something I started tonight in a friends book, calling it a night and leaving it as a pencil outline for now, finish it tomorrow.



crits?