Blackbooks

**Shay70** · 08-09-2010 03:21 PM

grim- try makin ur g flow into ur r more
awe- like the character but not so much the lettering work on simps
slek- sweet coloring and concept but some of the connections are too much (the line connecting the middle of the l and the e)

crits?

**Shay70** · 08-09-2010 03:22 PM

oh forgot to mention that all the letters there are partially bitten

**extinct** · 08-09-2010 06:36 PM

everything shay said
heres a piece i did for an exchange: werm

and this is a piece on paint...dont like the m

**Atmos419** · 08-09-2010 10:36 PM

Working on bar widths.
Some things I like about certain ones, other shit I just hate. I dunno.
Crits?

**SicK-** · 08-09-2010 10:42 PM

^nice stuff, you got good letter structure, i think your 3rd sketch is the best

**Atmos419** · 08-09-2010 10:51 PM

Thanks.

I didn't realize I posted the same picture twice. This one was supposed to be in there somewhere.

**Cyto Aka Son1c** · 08-09-2010 10:53 PM

colored it, not good lighting so it's inverted lol

**ViniVidiVici** · 08-09-2010 11:16 PM

Nice shit Atmos... good letters.

**Willis1989** · 08-10-2010 06:25 AM

Originally Posted by Scryy

scribbleesss

crits please, i'll give more when i see some more on this page

A more experienced writer may say im wrong but I think this one is phat as hell!

**Phat 2** · 08-10-2010 06:40 AM

it IS phat

hahaha

**DanielW** · 08-10-2010 07:48 AM

Scryy and Slek, DOPE!

**dangeri** · 08-10-2010 09:24 AM

playing with shape and getting reallllllllly annoyed with 'w's, but may do this properly later on,

Oh, got an app to make em smaller now too

**Shay70** · 08-10-2010 09:54 AM

repost for crits

deser-really like your bars
atmos-love the second last one the details are great

**Shay70** · 08-10-2010 09:56 AM

forgot to post this one

its an older one with a diff name

**Paint Pot & Pussy** · 08-10-2010 12:30 PM

some school shit.
crits?

**BoomSlang** · 08-10-2010 01:24 PM

3d is good except the inside of the o but the letters themselves need more work bottom connect of the p is out of scale

**SicK-** · 08-10-2010 01:52 PM

Dangeri-Definitly work on your letters, i cant even tell what the first one is
shay- Work on your letter structure lose all those extensions and do simps, second one has a nice fill but again your letters a weak
Sope-Your S and o definitly need work, i like the p and e