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    Quote Originally Posted by Gatsoi View Post
    Willis Go simple and try making your bars less boxy.

    Crittssss?
    The R is hot. Make the part that connects the two downward lines in the H skinny to match the skinny line in the R. The E just looks out of place and bad. It needs to be much thicker except you could make the middle straight left to right skinny to keep the theme going. The k looks good except for the line that is like / Make that one thicker and leave the rest the same.

    I know thats a lot of crits but I do like it.
    Last edited by ShutYourEyes; 08-20-2010 at 01:10 PM.

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    Thanks guys.

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    How's this?

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    you draw really slow. and the E is entirely too skinny. and i dont really like your R. but thats just me
    Fuck off.

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    Willis, almost every letter needs work bud. Bar thickness is all over the place
    Lose the extension on the w and just concentrate on making your letter bars the same width. Should even drop the 3d to be honest unitl you sort your structure out a bit .

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    Rhek, not really feeling that one. I think the bottom of the R and K need some work, seems too fat to me.



    There is a bright orange outline around the whole thing but it didnt show up on the scan, any crits?


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    your stuff consistently looks better chad, only thing i would change on that is the lower part of the h bud. for some reason that seems out of place to me

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    Chad-I would throw a splash or 3d to clean up some empty space, its too white behind that H.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SicK- View Post

    Messin with letters, Can i get some crits on my letters

    aint noone said shit so im gonna,
    work on purportions, stick simple and your on tha right track.

    my advice is keep doin what your doin just mind that purportions yo.

    i dont usually do this shit but its 4am in the mornin' and i cant sleep.
    if you wanna know anymore pm me er some shit some time.

    Quote Originally Posted by Stigma02 View Post
    prismacolor haha saved up for the 24 pack.
    this, k. straight up get a big jacket and a belt doggie. dont pay that shit its stupid expensive for one, and the majority of the cameras are fake/not being watched, IF they are, they cant legally chase you past their property. ive been chased, dont stop run. WORST case senario you get caught its theft under your gonna be fine. to sum it up, RACK IT. save your self alot of money, resecesion is a bitch.

    get creative, racking is easy. dont walk in all G'd out. you'll attract attention, sounds stupid but its true. dont rock tha hat and pull yo' fuckin pants up. haha jus some advice yo.
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    chad im always diggin your fills

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    Willis - Atm keep your bar width the same, you can especially see that with the T.

    Rhek - (for the newest piece posted) I think the h would look better if you tapered the bottom edges off like youve done on the r and k.

    Chad - im agreeing with boomslang on the h, altough i can see why you put it there. never the less sick.

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    made this today

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    Added colour

    Crits?

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    awe- thats sick but make the hole in the a consistent with the rest, lose the ring things on the w, flip the extention on the bottom of the a so its more symmetrical, and work on the top right section of the e. its sick tho

    chad- make the green fill more consistent, i.e a pattern throughout
    We're a comedic duo. like Barack Obama and Will Smith

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    heres some of my recent shit, just been tryin random words...almost


    and this next one the ink leaked the fuck out on the page, it was rather brutal..lol
    Quote Originally Posted by ChadWarden View Post
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    chad: you're the only one i like on this page, throw a drop shadow and a force field around it and you'll be set.

    Last edited by BlacktodaFuture; 08-21-2010 at 05:04 PM.
    Quote Originally Posted by vman View Post
    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
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    chad-thats pretty dope

    crits?

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    theres more but im still workin on em. feels good to have internet again

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlacktodaFuture View Post
    chad: you're the only one i like on this page, throw a drop shadow and a force field around it and you'll be set.

    bottom page bump

    juice: i feel like all of those are too hectic, simple with some flair is the way to do it

    kane: keep at it, remember simples!

    nose2: my boy writes brute and im telling you if you right that the problem you will have is that the BR will flow nice and the UTE will flow nice togther but making the BR flow with the UTE is gonna be hard. go simple.

    dangeri: simple... alots. do thats.

    werm: i like the wat you are taking that with the circles, progress that more and it will be dope.

    rhek: i feel like it's almost to generic like howtodrawgraffiti.com or some shit. take it your own way but keep it simple and shit will be fresh.

    i guess in all my graff experience i have learned that all the legendary cats like saber, kem5, and revoke and all the others know how to do simples and just put their own flair too it, don't start out too crazy, just do the alphabet and experiment, and you will find what you like from sharp letters to loose letters and etc. those are my crits. time to pass the drunk out.
    Quote Originally Posted by vman View Post
    those new tupac shakuras are dope.
    Quote Originally Posted by La Coka Nostra View Post
    chocolate milk is amazing.
    Quote Originally Posted by COBALT View Post
    I heard fromthegrave likes it in the butt!!!


 

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