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    Quote Originally Posted by PermanentMarkers View Post
    Every letter looks real good individually.

    could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump
    i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.

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    you finaly got your 3d down werd juss work on them add ons now

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    crits?

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    I would leave the bottom of the first t without an extension and where is the 3d on the right side of the last t?

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    prea the first T isnt that bad, just doesnt match the second one so its out of place... the A looks weird with the extension on the bottom, and the last T has some 3d covering the S, fix that and itll be a clean simp

    bek exchange (APES)

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    i didnt match them on purpose

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    Quote Originally Posted by SicK- View Post
    Juice- love that stuff, real clean and tight letters
    Prea-Wrong thread homie, but that handy is pretty dope
    Blacktodafuture- Umm i cant make out some of those letters lol, work on that the fill is clean though
    Deser- Nice fillls and letters homie
    Weak- Good shit little to busy though
    rhek- Your bars are crazy wobbly make em straight and try not to round ever edge. You need to start working n some new styles cuz your not progressing much.
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    and Prea i guess you liked my T i used in our battle?


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    huh i didnt even notice, i just draw what comes to my mind, guess that came to my mind.. but totally did muff up the 3d on the right T

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    Quote Originally Posted by lord_plankton View Post
    i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.
    Agreed, making the bottom smaller is way better idea.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juicee View Post
    just put a scrap paper under the paper you're drawing on lol np
    HAHA! no I meant it bled out into the weave of the paper not actually through, I use a piece of foam board underneath. Do you just use a standard sketch paper?

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    Zook, your letters are getting worse, man..

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    Kew1, they look pretty good but i would lose some of the extensions on that E.



    Fucked up the C, its a bit too skinny, and I played around with the A.

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    kew your shit looks so much better than when you first posted here.
    chad i dont like the top of the a but other than that everything else is lookin sharp

    i got bored so i made this


    most of the drop shadow is probably fucked up and i chicken scratch-freestyled it haha
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    Quote Originally Posted by ChadOne View Post
    Kew1, they look pretty good but i would lose some of the extensions on that E.



    Fucked up the C, its a bit too skinny, and I played around with the A.

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    Now thats what i mean!! looks fresh beside what you already pointed out. i might bend the left bar of h a little more torwards the right. the seem to spread a lil. thats just me. oh you might want to lift up the c a bit or lower the d. real good anyways. solid simple all the way.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall View Post
    Zook, your letters are getting worse, man..
    hah i fuckin KNOW! i had this sketch sitting around uncolored for almost a month, it needed a lot of work but i just said fuck it and colored it.... i try to go simpler but i just wanna give the shit too much style all at once and my skill cant handle that shit... any specifics on what looks good and what i shouldnt do?

    so im bumpin for some detailed crits, i know some things like the A and P should be completely scrapped lol, but i kinda liked part of the E and part of the S...

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    it does read apes!!!! i was like how does it read bek, no fuckin way..alright good for you.
    id say get away from those excessively connected letters. go simpler, uniform , dont squash your letters that much give em room. i extremely hate those thin parts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    hah i fuckin KNOW! i had this sketch sitting around uncolored for almost a month, it needed a lot of work but i just said fuck it and colored it.... i try to go simpler but i just wanna give the shit too much style all at once and my skill cant handle that shit... any specifics on what looks good and what i shouldnt do?
    http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4096/...d17b18e8_z.jpg
    so im bumpin for some detailed crits, i know some things like the A and P should be completely scrapped lol, but i kinda liked part of the E and part of the S...
    Didnt even think it was letters to start with until lord_plankton said it was "apes". Seriously insane stuff besides from I couldnt read it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    go simpler
    You should definitely do that (go simpler).
    That APES just looks like a few bars with mad swiggley bars.
    They don't even look like letters. The only letter that's even remotely readable is the S.

    Look dude, your color, your shine effects are spot on, but them' letters yo'....

    I told you the same shit like 2months ago, and it's only gotten worse since then.
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