juice: i feel like all of those are too hectic, simple with some flair is the way to do it
kane: keep at it, remember simples!
nose2: my boy writes brute and im telling you if you right that the problem you will have is that the BR will flow nice and the UTE will flow nice togther but making the BR flow with the UTE is gonna be hard. go simple.
dangeri: simple... alots. do thats.
werm: i like the wat you are taking that with the circles, progress that more and it will be dope.
rhek: i feel like it's almost to generic like howtodrawgraffiti.com or some shit. take it your own way but keep it simple and shit will be fresh.
i guess in all my graff experience i have learned that all the legendary cats like saber, kem5, and revoke and all the others know how to do simples and just put their own flair too it, don't start out too crazy, just do the alphabet and experiment, and you will find what you like from sharp letters to loose letters and etc. those are my crits. time to pass the drunk out.