Blackbooks

[BlacktodaFuture]

chad: you're the only one i like on this page, throw a drop shadow and a force field around it and you'll be set.

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juice: i feel like all of those are too hectic, simple with some flair is the way to do it

kane: keep at it, remember simples!

nose2: my boy writes brute and im telling you if you right that the problem you will have is that the BR will flow nice and the UTE will flow nice togther but making the BR flow with the UTE is gonna be hard. go simple.

dangeri: simple... alots. do thats.

werm: i like the wat you are taking that with the circles, progress that more and it will be dope.

rhek: i feel like it's almost to generic like howtodrawgraffiti.com or some shit. take it your own way but keep it simple and shit will be fresh.

i guess in all my graff experience i have learned that all the legendary cats like saber, kem5, and revoke and all the others know how to do simples and just put their own flair too it, don't start out too crazy, just do the alphabet and experiment, and you will find what you like from sharp letters to loose letters and etc. those are my crits. time to pass the drunk out.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

[One Evil]

above me is mad fuckin dope

[ViniVidiVici]

Juice I feel all the letters are sweet, but there isnt much flow

[RESK13]

[Gatsoi]

[blunder]

@Juicee do you mind me asking what type of pen/marker you use for your outline?

[Juicee]

just a sharpie fine point

[blunder]

i was having bleed probs with sharpies so i switched to staedler pigment liners, maybe it's my paper. your shit looks super clean though maybe I'll try sharpies again. thanks!

[Juicee]

just put a scrap paper under the paper you're drawing on lol np

[weakfingers]

Shitty sketch.

[FuckTheFame]

weakfingers - like the cracks in it but im not too sure what it says
gatsoi - those highlights are dope and i like the color choices. prob try getting the drop shadow a little more legit
resk - i like the 3d
cyto - killed it. those eyes and that fill are godly
blacktodafuture - that character is dope. it'd be cool to see that head not be attached to a human body tho. to me it looks more like a creature. just imo tho
juicee - ...throw some color in there? haha besides that i really have no clue what to say. looks like you been in the book for a while. the drips on that syloh are ill

[Willis1989]

Juice - I think those are shit hot mate, like practically every piece.

Rhek - Good, maybe make the middle bar on the E a bit longer to take up some of that space

Weakfingers - I like it, maybe just a little too much detail

Crits on this pls!!!

[kew1]

^ my girls first atempt at graff.

[albino one]

i made this yrsterday

[Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub]

the letters in the last one could use some work.
and thoes shine marks on the ekilla are pretty lame.

[Gatsoi]

Waste- Bring the outline closer to the letters and use alot less bubbles. Try and make the S flow
resk - i like the 3d
Kew1- I reallyyy like the E in the first piece, the fill is nice too.
Deser- Sick!
Juice- I like that style, It reminds me of ESKiMO2

[iamBoZ96]

Juicee thats dope bro

[SicK-]

Juice- love that stuff, real clean and tight letters
Prea-Wrong thread homie, but that handy is pretty dope
Blacktodafuture- Umm i cant make out some of those letters lol, work on that the fill is clean though
Deser- Nice fillls and letters homie
Weak- Good shit little to busy though
rhek- Your bars are crazy wobbly make em straight and try not to round ever edge. You need to start working n some new styles cuz your not progressing much.

[LeaksOne]

gatsoi, why do you keep posting the exact same letters?