Blackbooks

[hpir]

chad-thats pretty dope

crits?

bump

[ShutYourEyes]

That line across the middle ruined it

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

gatsoi, why do you keep posting the exact same letters?

lmao!!

[ViniVidiVici]

Alright finally I get to post a pic not on the bottom of the page. anyways here it is. kinda made some mistakes when inking it, then tried to correct those mistakes but made them worse... eh oh well.


oh and that's not my tag, I was just trying different shit out.

Crits?

[PermanentMarkers]

Waste- Bring the outline closer to the letters and use alot less bubbles. Try and make the S flow
resk - i like the 3d
Kew1- I reallyyy like the E in the first piece, the fill is nice too.
Deser- Sick!
Juice- I like that style, It reminds me of ESKiMO2

Your dropshadow sucks man... The best example is the E, but its different on every letter.. just on the E its like 3 different shadows.

Your R is an A with a chunk missing.

The H is just.... there actually not much wrong with the H, its just got no style. On second thought make the middle bar bigga

The E

The K looks like a dude about to karate chop something in half, now thats pretty cool but i doubt everyone will see that like i did. Make the arm of the dude karate chopping way bigger, so it wont look like an arm anymore.

And dont do that shine

That line across the middle ruined it

Didnt even see the line till you said something about it, wierd...

[PermanentMarkers]

Every letter looks real good individually.

could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump

[lord_plankton]

Every letter looks real good individually.

could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump

i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.

[kew1]

[woonybomber]

you finaly got your 3d down werd juss work on them add ons now

[PREA672]

crits?

[BoomSlang]

I would leave the bottom of the first t without an extension and where is the 3d on the right side of the last t?

[Zookyook]

prea the first T isnt that bad, just doesnt match the second one so its out of place... the A looks weird with the extension on the bottom, and the last T has some 3d covering the S, fix that and itll be a clean simp

bek exchange (APES)

crits wanted...

[PREA672]

i didnt match them on purpose

[SicK-]

Juice- love that stuff, real clean and tight letters
Prea-Wrong thread homie, but that handy is pretty dope
Blacktodafuture- Umm i cant make out some of those letters lol, work on that the fill is clean though
Deser- Nice fillls and letters homie
Weak- Good shit little to busy though
rhek- Your bars are crazy wobbly make em straight and try not to round ever edge. You need to start working n some new styles cuz your not progressing much.

Bottom page bump
and Prea i guess you liked my T i used in our battle?


Lol no beef though

[PREA672]

huh i didnt even notice, i just draw what comes to my mind, guess that came to my mind.. but totally did muff up the 3d on the right T

[PermanentMarkers]

i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.

Agreed, making the bottom smaller is way better idea.

[blunder]

just put a scrap paper under the paper you're drawing on lol np

HAHA! no I meant it bled out into the weave of the paper not actually through, I use a piece of foam board underneath. Do you just use a standard sketch paper?

[Phillip McDougall]

Zook, your letters are getting worse, man..

[kew1]

[ChadOne]

Kew1, they look pretty good but i would lose some of the extensions on that E.



Fucked up the C, its a bit too skinny, and I played around with the A.

Any Crits?

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