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    tofe, i have seen better from you , the f in this one looks more like an e and the e is way too big to fit with the other letters you have there. also the 3d is all over the place bud

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    can i get some crits?

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    Quote Originally Posted by SAINT1 View Post
    hey guys i tried doin a simpler one. crits ?

    bump. crits please

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    saint - the fact the S is like facing downward throws off the flow for me, feel me.. its just a structure issue

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    s needs to be thicker lower left leg of the n should be thicker right one thinner and t is not uniform width near the cross bar, not a bad start tho

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    thanks guys ill fix everything now and post it

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    hi guys..i'm new on this forum, and here is my sketches


    soffy for bad english...i am from serbia

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    Serbia fuck that's cool, I like the 3D on the 1st one and the MOS I can dig idk why I just like it
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    Damn unique, I don't think you need to be in the toy forums, your at least in the intermediate forums.

    and Saint your bars are all off, the thickness of each letters is different.

    I'll try get some more sketches up, haven't had time since the last few days I have been moving back to college and/or smoking the brains from my head.
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    unique go to the bigboys thread haha u r not toy, tofe ur leters seem to spread out as u go try to get the widths the same
    jed1oner ur bars get fatter adn skinnier
    smokers that green piece is legit and ur handy is ill too,
    here are a few i drew crits

    both say theres for the battle

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    redeyes yours looks like rums
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    Nemos, those letters need serious work. You've got Intermediate coloring skills, and flow, but toy letters. Learn letter structure.

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    thanks guys...

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    hah what phil said, me and u are in the same boat unique!

    boomslang these are pretty dope, the top one really looks like its on a wall almost



    snare thats a pretty clean simp... do summore!
    Last edited by Zookyook; 09-03-2010 at 07:13 AM.

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    Snare: that simp looks pretty ill


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    Default a couple i have been working on





    I know im a toy, Im practicing every day and I feel my progression is a lot better from when I started but I also know I need to expand my style so I can graduate from my Toydom. Crits would be helpful! pictures were taken from my cell, sorry for the low quality.

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    cobra:
    Try making your letters more even goes from fat to skinny back to fat feel me?


 

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