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    s needs to be thicker lower left leg of the n should be thicker right one thinner and t is not uniform width near the cross bar, not a bad start tho

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    thanks guys ill fix everything now and post it

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    hi guys..i'm new on this forum, and here is my sketches


    soffy for bad english...i am from serbia

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    Serbia fuck that's cool, I like the 3D on the 1st one and the MOS I can dig idk why I just like it
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    Damn unique, I don't think you need to be in the toy forums, your at least in the intermediate forums.

    and Saint your bars are all off, the thickness of each letters is different.

    I'll try get some more sketches up, haven't had time since the last few days I have been moving back to college and/or smoking the brains from my head.
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    unique go to the bigboys thread haha u r not toy, tofe ur leters seem to spread out as u go try to get the widths the same
    jed1oner ur bars get fatter adn skinnier
    smokers that green piece is legit and ur handy is ill too,
    here are a few i drew crits

    both say theres for the battle

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    redeyes yours looks like rums
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    Nemos, those letters need serious work. You've got Intermediate coloring skills, and flow, but toy letters. Learn letter structure.

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    thanks guys...

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    hah what phil said, me and u are in the same boat unique!

    boomslang these are pretty dope, the top one really looks like its on a wall almost



    snare thats a pretty clean simp... do summore!
    Last edited by Zookyook; 09-03-2010 at 07:13 AM.

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    Snare: that simp looks pretty ill


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    I know im a toy, Im practicing every day and I feel my progression is a lot better from when I started but I also know I need to expand my style so I can graduate from my Toydom. Crits would be helpful! pictures were taken from my cell, sorry for the low quality.

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    cobra:
    Try making your letters more even goes from fat to skinny back to fat feel me?

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    first piece-type thing... critttttsssssss please

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    first piece-type thing...
    mistakes ive already notice include the inconsistent width of the bars, for example the M is thicker than most of the other letters... the fill is messy... bends are kind of wacky in certain places, like the serif on the first 's'

    other crits pleaaasssse

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    I think the problem with noob graff is that you try to hard to achieve something you're unfamiliar with. You can't just pick up a guitar for the first time and shred like a god, same with graff. Start with simple things...then as you go along you realize you can do other stuff with it, start adding some little twangs in there..ya know...Instead of jumping into complex design, you need to understand the skeleton first. Lookin' good all around gentlemen..just dull it down and you work on structure!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stigma02 View Post
    unique go to the bigboys thread haha u r not toy, tofe ur leters seem to spread out as u go try to get the widths the same
    jed1oner ur bars get fatter adn skinnier
    smokers that green piece is legit and ur handy is ill too,
    here are a few i drew crits

    both say theres for the battle
    bump for crits cobra ur 1st s is ill , ur 3d is off get ur width of letters and thickness of them the same do simps '
    Last edited by Stigma02; 09-03-2010 at 05:12 PM.

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    His first one is not ill.
    If there is hope, it lies in the writers.

    Quote Originally Posted by testing. View Post
    Only one of them in my pics was a bathroom. I figured why not.
    And I'm so hardcore, the door didn't even have a lock on it.
    Quote Originally Posted by RMA View Post
    the other day I saw a giant dick that someone painted across an entire fucknig house top to bottom, that was the shit.


 

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