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    dont make the R slant like that and dont have that uh whatever going through the middle of the piece, other than that pretty solid, kinda of a advance simple I guess.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BoomSlang View Post
    2 from this week, need a new scanner as the flash on the cam is annoying




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    color schemes and 3d and all that jazz are solid, but work on the letters themselves cuz they are key. The W and Y are good, but IMO work on the Ts and S,
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    Boom-In that first one Im not really feeling the Y and I dont like how the T's are not connected. your bar width is good in the first one, i leke the softness of the letters.

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    crits?
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    please gimme detailed, professional and constructive crits please:





    thanks in advance for not bullshitting

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    Bars on the A on the top one is a tiny bit to narrow I think dude, niiice fill tho,

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    please gimme detailed, professional and constructive crits please:
    I'm not capable of such things so I'm not going to say anything

    And safe that second one is pretty cool
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    this shits phat.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    please gimme detailed, professional and constructive crits please:





    thanks in advance for not bullshitting


    aight bud heres an opinion

    1st piece yer doing what you normally do. overthinking and overworking things, doesnt need most of those extensions or chips and whats the deal with the one under the a off to the left?
    also the 3d is off on that one when compared top and bottom. they both have different vanishing points. top of the letters looks like vanishing point is about an inch above the letters themselves because of the pull in on the ends. then the bottom of the same letters looks like the vanishing point was moves half a mile away heh.

    2nd piece is alot better in my opinion. aside from me not understanding the tree for an a bud.i like the fill, like the letters, background does my head in a bit cause its kinda busy bit its still cool but that tree does my head in lol






    safe, that top ones hard bud aside from the bar in the middle of the a, i dont know whats happening with your s's though seeing as they seem to be evolving into b's on the third one

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    My first blackbook piece, what ya think?
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    thanks boomslang, that was grand

    in the first piece, actually I didn't go as nuts as i used to. this time I worked with simple straight letters and drew bars for letter structure (that's the part I'm trying to work on the most in my pieces) and THEN AFTER I was done with the letter's basic form, I added a few extensions here and there. I need to get some crits on letter structure. is it working like that? am I on the right track and shit?
    and ure right about the 3D, I just noticed it

    and regarding the second one. well this is a cedar, it's our national tree, and it's in our flag. I'm Lebanese like the fill on the piece, the flag has 3 horizontal stripes going red, white and red, with the cedar in the middle of the white stripe in the middle.
    and the cedar has a triangular shape like the A. so it works. dono how come it's doin yer head in..

    anyway. can I please get some more crits from more peeps ?

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    "Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
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    stuck is my hero.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    i have nothing to say that hasnt already been said except that you have improved shitloads since this disaster below. you probably realise how bad this one was now


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    i like the yellow one better ll
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    yeah no i can definitely see the flaws now that i went all the way back to straight letters, like the extensions that are all over the place and shit. but I still think that it's not AS bad as everyone gave me crap about it being.
    although I'd apreciate it if I could get crits on the letter structure of the first flick I posted on this page. coz I'm trying to take a step forward by adding some extensions and shit to the now fine straight letter structure. and I wanna know if im doing it right. and if not, advice never harms

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    I usually don't piece, but ehh.
    I was bored today.

    I also never draw any characters, but boredom just makes me do shit that I usually don't do.
    It was also a sketch, so some parts aren't too visible.
    Last edited by IbuprofenTablets; 09-08-2010 at 03:44 PM.
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