Blackbooks

[3Cr1k7]

here it is finished. sorry for separate posts

[Lazey]

caik- so much progress in a single step haha, its nice, maybe a bit too much overlaps whatever it is, great job son.

[One Evil]

quick hollow i jus tossed up ... the R is a tad small but w.e

[BoomSlang]

2 i did this week

[RES4]

new sketch coming along. Also everyone here should shut the fuck up if your not here to give/receive POSATIVE crits or tips. Wana talk shit? PM them and stop infecting this page please.

why do you want positive crits? they wont help you whatsoever. when someone tells you its bad its because theyre trying to help you.

that piece is shite. the best thing you can do right now is rip it up and start drawing keyboard letters. seriously, thats the best advice you will get in here for a while.

you can take this or you can ignore it, i dont give a fuck im just trying to help you out

[PREA672]

[BoomSlang]

prea, on the ego middle bar of the e is a little too thick, center one of the g and 3d is off (goes up and to the left on the spine of the e and nothing on the bottom bar of the e, also nothing inner lower bar of the o.)
sech piece bar width is all over the place bud also the sharp leading edge of the s looks out of place and would prolly look better rounded

[dangeri]

New word, maybe, don't know yet,

Crits welcome

[Phat 2]

boomslang is ur first flick a wall?

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Finally go around to coloring that English sketch but its fuggin sloppy


And a homie Scene

[FlippingChickens]

[snare428]

not really feeling the e, but here goes. comments and crits please

[BoomSlang]

Phat, nah bud. all my stuff is bookwork

[j3d10n3r]

smokers: that second one is fireeeeeee
flippingchickens: change up the colors and go easier on the overlaps, i can barely read it
snare: try to make your letters more even, the s is a lot bigger than the rest of the letters. and your 3d needs some work

sorry, my camera's a bitch, or i would be posting flicks.

[3Cr1k7]

english - personally i think if you would have done a simpler color scheme and maybe a little less emphasis on the 3d lines i think it would look dope. its already good though man keep it up.

Snare - the size comparison from the S is huge compared to the N. if you made the s a little smaller or the n a little bigger i think you would have a solid piece. im digging the colors and the 3d looks ill.

twyst - speachless

here are 2 more sketches i made. i was experimenting with different k's and a's. crits?

[j3d10n3r]

bumping for crits

[BoomSlang]

english - personally i think if you would have done a simpler color scheme and maybe a little less emphasis on the 3d lines i think it would look dope. its already good though man keep it up.

Snare - the size comparison from the S is huge compared to the N. if you made the s a little smaller or the n a little bigger i think you would have a solid piece. im digging the colors and the 3d looks ill.

twyst - speachless

here are 2 more sketches i made. i was experimenting with different k's and a's. crits?

basic structure flaws i see...
yellow one pull back the lower bar of the c so the a is not unrecognisable, also work on keeping the width of your bars consistent for all letters, the tapering effect you have going on there does not work until you have the straights working for you from repetition.
blue one has same basic issues , how bout slant the c a bit so it still has size but could then pull the lower bar back in a bit so it doesnt kill your next letter.
most people are gonna tell you to go to basic keyboard letters until you have them down before you move on, while this is important i think you need to break your bad habits early, your eagerness to produce a decent product is trying to make you cut corners. better to learn consistency of bar width and flow and once you have that down you can move up from there. hope that made sense since i am runnin on 3.5 hrs sleep and its like 3.20 am here lol

[BoomSlang]

bumping for crits

e is a bit too thick bud and careful on your 3d, some letters it goes straight down and on others its off to the left a bit

[3Cr1k7]

basic structure flaws i see...
yellow one pull back the lower bar of the c so the a is not unrecognisable, also work on keeping the width of your bars consistent for all letters, the tapering effect you have going on there does not work until you have the straights working for you from repetition.
blue one has same basic issues , how bout slant the c a bit so it still has size but could then pull the lower bar back in a bit so it doesnt kill your next letter.
most people are gonna tell you to go to basic keyboard letters until you have them down before you move on, while this is important i think you need to break your bad habits early, your eagerness to produce a decent product is trying to make you cut corners. better to learn consistency of bar width and flow and once you have that down you can move up from there. hope that made sense since i am runnin on 3.5 hrs sleep and its like 3.20 am here lol

haha yeah that made sense. thanks for giving back such CONSTRUCTIVE criticism instead of telling my to tear out my brain and start from scratch or some witty remark like im used to getting haha. yeah i understand what you are saying and yes i agree i am a bit too earer. ill have to take it slow from now on. thanks bro.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

One evil-i like the left side of the H and the K
Boomslang-doooo-hohohope too clean.
But the whole relationship with W and Y is kind of awkward too me.
Tofe-ehh its better than the usual stuff but that E is getting all up in the F's crotch
Snare- the R-E are look ok to me
Crick-idk if its cait or caLk well either way you should really space out them letters and maybe not make the bottom of the C go over the rest of the letters...oh shit well I just read boomslang post..so ya he pretty much put it perfectly