Blackbooks

[mawks]

didn't know where else to post these.

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[aces]

I'd definately rock those haha! The only thing I can see that's weird with the letters is the leg of the R going back into the other bar but that's just not my style haha other than that good stuff.

[KNS13]

[aces]

Clean stuff there JHIZ I like it.

[EXI]

here are my first ones in order





And this is my own style im making, what you think?

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[KNS13]

bars and simples my *****

[RECScyb]

mawks: those are dope
Jhiz: feelin it.. super fresh.
exi: it would probably be in your best interest to forgot you ever saw those learn graffiti letters and start from scratch so you can better develop your style not someone elses with a couple of your tweaks. nah mean.. no hate just tryin to help.

crits?

[SECH]

a quikie for a battle wrote 21 instead of 12

[EXI]

rec: what do you mean? can you give me a link to letters so I can learn?

[SAINT1]

another simple one, i did this in class :P ive notticed a few mistakes already but what do u guys think ? crits ?

@exi
look at your keyboard, thats the best youll find to learn from

[BoomSlang]

2 from this week, need a new scanner as the flash on the cam is annoying

[EXI]

nice boom, i like second one.. am i going right way with simps? i just learned what they were today..

[EXI]

nice boom i like last one's 3d, how am i doing with simps. this is my first time trying simps so.

[BoomSlang]

Top code all letters except the c and o overlap too much, all letter bars are different width 3d is off badly bud, looks like should all be down and to the right, inner part of the d has both right and left drop shadow and e has upper and lower.


Simp...same basic problems, bars all different widths and 3d a bit fooked all over, pick a direction and make sure you stick to it.


Lower code is your best effort, bars relativley same size till you hit the e, then i dunno what happened. Also lose the lil doo dads off the e, you need basics down first bud before you start addin anything yet

[RECScyb]

Exi: check it out like a simple E would have four bars.. X two bars so forth.. just make sure when you do simples to make all the letters even size and make sure your bars are straight and your bar has even width throughout the bar.. best i can explain. hope this helps
Saint: S and A overlap to much and maybe its your style but i think it would look better if the letter were a bit less rounded off..

[drOping]

[Stigma02]

i like it slek u should try it with the e straigh with no angle, just to see if it flows more

[EXI]

Top code all letters except the c and o overlap too much, all letter bars are different width 3d is off badly bud, looks like should all be down and to the right, inner part of the d has both right and left drop shadow and e has upper and lower.


Simp...same basic problems, bars all different widths and 3d a bit fooked all over, pick a direction and make sure you stick to it.


Lower code is your best effort, bars relativley same size till you hit the e, then i dunno what happened. Also lose the lil doo dads off the e, you need basics down first bud before you start addin anything yet

Thank, I'll practice when I get out of the shower

Exi: check it out like a simple E would have four bars.. X two bars so forth.. just make sure when you do simples to make all the letters even size and make sure your bars are straight and your bar has even width throughout the bar.. best i can explain. hope this helps
Saint: S and A overlap to much and maybe its your style but i think it would look better if the letter were a bit less rounded off..

Okay thanks, I'll be suer to do that

[IbuprofenTablets]

Thank, I'll practice when I get out of the shower

You come to this website while you're in the shower?
LOL.

[EXI]

You come to this website while you're in the shower?
LOL.

yeah man.. haha no, I was about to head in the shower lol.