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    crits?

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    PREA - nice structure man. im jealous
    STIGMA - still no 3d? work on those proportions too man

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    Quote Originally Posted by proNYNJA View Post
    doug-

    some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20"
    and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last.


    Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ.
    if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.

    bottom page bump for crits

    prea: great straight letters
    stigma im sorry but i cant read it, to much going on.
    fucktheflame: top on is clean but u needa work on ur tags, bottom one is clean too
    Last edited by proNYNJA; 09-25-2010 at 09:00 PM.
    SURGEone.

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    that pink one is dope, somthing about the R bugs me but i dont know what

    stigma- you're trying too hard, do less. Do nothing at all
    prea do something more with that A, the rest i a pretty dope simple
    dirty doug- it look good but the 3d is kinda lame in my opinion, the yellow doesnt really go well with the rest of the fill.

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    stigma-simples
    Prea-i dunno ur E is just one long bent bar and doesnt match ur p and R.
    fuckjthefame-really dont know what it ssays but its not my cup of tea
    surge-i personally dont like your superr loos style, there is no structural support in those letters...they will probably melt away


    wish i could say this was a freestyle

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    SIEK- I'd say make the S a little taller to match the rest of the letters, chill with the arrows for right now untill you get some solid letters going and get rid of that little peg by the K --what is that?? Thats a solid 3D though, just work on the shadings and highlighted areas, some of the highlighted areas shouldn't be highlighted.

    SURGE- I don't know just not liking it- it looks more Powerpuff Girls than graff to me. Especially with those stars...but if thats what you're going for than so be it

    FuckTheFame- dont know what you're doing

    Stigma- does that say ROC?!@#RAC-RBC?

    PREA- keep playing with those bars- fix that 3D though


    my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think?
    Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well

    SOPE - grind those simples for a while before dressing it up with all those fills and extras

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    surge really digging that piece.. try making the top of our R bigger. might fit in better with the piece

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    that's hot, the only things I would change are, that bar coming out of the right side of the A, and scooting the E to the right just a bit so it's not being so overlapped by the R.
    Last edited by mawks; 09-26-2010 at 12:07 PM.

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    e too hidden and r just ugly , overall no flow. definately not hot.
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    haha cool u man u win, i give up
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    Plankton's the most successful troll in this section of the forum atm.
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    and to make it interesting and entertaining, whoever loses removes everything in his signature and puts the line "I am (winner's name)'s bitch" in bold capital letters instead. and never takes it off, or else gets banned. deal, fag?
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    i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is

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    prea , sorry bud i just dont like that at all, no consistancy , no flow and just randon bits here n there.

    heres 2 lame ones from this week, gonna try something a lil different this week and see what i come up with





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    i dont like the kinks in the Ts

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    second one is quite good. dunno about the connecting bar though.
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    haha cool u man u win, i give up
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    Plankton's the most successful troll in this section of the forum atm.
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    and to make it interesting and entertaining, whoever loses removes everything in his signature and puts the line "I am (winner's name)'s bitch" in bold capital letters instead. and never takes it off, or else gets banned. deal, fag?
    Quote Originally Posted by Shroomsh View Post
    i actually love plankton, fucking legend he is

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    playing around with photoshop
    blahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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    droping i like everything but the extension from the k
    prea no flow srry dnt like it at all
    boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece?



    freestyle of my buddies name DAVID

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    That says David? I see like REC or something. If that is an R, it's dope.
    JHIZ - that's a good simp.
    BoomSlang - Both are cool, but I don't like the letters connected on the second.

    Been a while but meh,
    The forests of Timber have changed.
    But the owls are still around.
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    That says david?

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    jhiz- thats a solid simple, try to clean up the lines a bit tho
    fury-clean up the lines and keep the bars equal width

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    srry pasted the wrong code that one i did post says R.O.C this one is DAVID

    the 3d has 2 different yllws but it didnt show up in the pic

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stigma02 View Post
    boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece?
    the extension from the s to balance the one from the w

    i will end up redoing the 2nd one a few times till i get it how i want it. next time will prolly be without the bottom connector bar.
    thanks for the comments so far

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    [QUOTE=Shell703;1669144]


    my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think?
    Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well

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