over all, it looks kind of childish, id stick with simples and throw ups before anything, definitely leave the characters for later.. just my opinion
i know it was posted yesterday but with all the beef that went on i didnt think it got its proper dues.. so here it is again
trying new style
alright i know the picture is shitty. its cuz i sketch with these light blue eno pencils. tried to play with it in photoshop to make it more visible.
inspired by Rime's style, im just trying out some new things. not completely finished yet, gotta do some more things about the S and what not.
any feedback helps whether its good or bad feedback lol
new style Joks by ~JOKZ~ tradebreak (school), on Flickr
unique hit me up with a lean2
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I concur. No hard feelings mang.Originally Posted by SzrZx
Tot Black Books. Nuff said.new-old sketch
Man, I wont throw shit, if only cause I want a record of my progress.. or a reminder of why I should keep practicing, you know? encouragement; so I don't ever drop whack shit like that, and believe me, I can lay some toy shit :P
Constant reminder or what I don't want, lol.
But I will still go to that thread, thanks man..
also, more critz still appreciated.
Edit: Nvm, I went there, I'm still working on the simples I just have a soft spot for anything remotely relating to metal of any kind, like Death's logo or the cannibal corpse type font/style, relating to that, anyone like metal or know what I'm getting at with my desired style? and as for chars, yea I know they aren't too great, but I just doodled, picked a few i liked and tried to redo them, either way your right, they shouldn't be my top priority, got any more tips?
Last edited by Venile; 10-06-2010 at 12:37 AM.
Rhyme so hard, I left your tip stiff like paralysis.
Daredevil fucker, Doing keg stands hooked up to dialysis, ripping this with savage penmanship, fuck chicken scratch and write in "Gorrilaz gone apeshit"!
Acid-in-the-air is the equivalent of what I spit, quit, and don't ever talk shit, cause I'm a 2 ton, sky scraper brain-raping, mind-eraser, starting every line like I start fights, WITH EYE LAZERS !!!
-Venile
wats up guys , im sziv , n im new to dis place , iv been writtin graff for sumthing like 6 morth or close to it. anyway critz???be nice :P
yea first of all resizing the pic helps a lot. this way we get a better overview of your work, cuz right now its kinda hard to determine what it looks like. after u do that, we'll talk more lolwats up guys , im sziv , n im new to dis place , iv been writtin graff for sumthing like 6 morth or close to it. anyway critz???
just do SIMPLES. do simples until you feel like you wanna kill yourself.... and then do more. do that until someone else who is better than you says something good about them then start adding some of your own personally touch to it. trust it'll all be okay.
Yup...I've been here before.
? how do i resize it??
bump for crits?
Yup...I've been here before.
watch the bars tare... make sure they match up, like the top of ur T and left of the R especially.... and if ur gonna make bits like on the bottom of the R, use more than one so it matches the other letters, maybe put some on the middle of the A and E, who knows....
insomniac boredom shit
hey i resized it an also heres one i did today :P
critz???
the first one im not digging. the second one tho can use some improvement. i like the E and S isnt bad, work on ur other letters thohey i resized it an also heres one i did today :P
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“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
Haven't posted in a while here's my latest i did today
what does it say?
wat iv been fuckin with latly
suggestions?
Nemor I love that first one, I don't care what anyone says, it's dope1
"I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me."
--Hunter S. Thompson--
Straight From the SE MI
I agree with ViniVidiVici; Good job Nemor, that shit looks fresh. What sort of markers do you use?
@ HPIR, stick to your bars. They've got a lot more potential than bubbles.
@ JOKZ, I would hardly fuck with your ARES at all. I like it.
I'd change a few tiny details but nothing drastic.
All in all, I'd say leave it the way it is and give it some color. Good job.
@ MOGAN, I know you've already got that shit on a wall,
but I think the second and third letter (O,N? MONER?)
should have thin bars like the M, E, and R do.
Last edited by WoRdSmYtH; 10-10-2010 at 04:14 AM.
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