And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.
MOGAN! PLEASE READ! what markers do you use? I'm in the market for some new ones, please share =3
Last edited by EXI; 10-25-2010 at 10:11 PM.
@stuck i like your throwie and that cassie is pretty sick too like someone already said space it out better so the letters are so cramped.
@EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.
i have spent 4 hours developing letters sketching them out doing the 3d and coloring it on this already so i dont want to fuck up im just looking for advice on a fill. i dont want specifics but im thinking cool colors would go well since it contrasts the warm in the 3d any thoughts on that? and crits on letter structure is always appreciated
Last edited by Stigma02; 10-25-2010 at 11:56 PM.
On that piece that just did up there... I used shitty markers that I found at my work lol... The Black outline is a dico paint marker... the pink is a cheap highlighter that was loosing ink and going dead and the purple was also some cheap ass marker I stumbled upon lol
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
decided to do n old school peice.... and if anyone has seen this R before tell me cus after i drew it , i felt like i had seen it before, if it is a bite its unintentional
haha ok then i was looking at the wrong person give me crits plzz!
Yo no hate stig but I dont really like it. theres awkward extenstions, theres alot of connections between letters that dont belong and your t looks like a cancer from the I. I'm guessing you dont wanna hear this but I wouldn't do fill on that at all. Draw another up make the improvements and fill that. your headed in the right direction though.
doodling and messing around on the book, playing mad scientist trying to experiment with some weird shit
gimme ur opinions
Pretty shitty, but what else am I going to do in a psychology class? Anything I can do better? Obviously this is utter shit compared to some people, but I think it's only going to get better from here.
try to make ur letters have more flow now.... for example in the a, the round part, instead of having like 3 straight bars to make the o, just use one curvy bar.. do that for the other letters as well
Last edited by "awesome"ONE; 10-26-2010 at 08:33 PM.