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    Quote Originally Posted by thepekins View Post

    quick, baked, fuckin around. ran out of space for teh t
    Chill out with the jiggedy Jaggedy shit you got going on with the "L"...
    The "F" is by far the best letter on here... Work off of that
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    yeah i meant to do the L differently but fucked it up

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    w g o n e- thanks for the crits, i thought my bars were even though?
    blacktodafuture- yeah, I'm just starting to go from really simp to curves and bends and pulls etc. and it's hard for me to do it to all of them.

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    kuake the bars really arent even... like the top right of ur K's.... and the bottom right too for that matter, also the left bar of the E in this one is about as uneven as it gets...

    itll help if u draw out each bar individually... just like meyor did here, thats why his bars are all even and shit... naaaaw'mean?

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    well with my K i was trying to pull the bar out to make it thicker, i see other people do it but they get "nice job man" and that, can you explain why my bar thickening or thining is bad? :s Like an example,

    see how his bars are thicker and thinner at times, how can I get good at this? :s because i just tried and i guess its bad.

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    bc. i know how to do it better then you do. start with bars doing the same thing, same size, then work on shit like that.

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    valid question... basically if u want to make thicker and thinner bars it has to get thicker at a constant angle... like the bottom left of safers S... u can see where he was sketching that bar into the next bar (this is what u should be doin, i do it too) and it gets thicker gradually and it makes it look more convincing, ur K just looks like a wonky triangle pretty much, its all about keeping flow....

    heres one from me with some thick to thin shit goin on...

    im not sayin this piece is perfect by any means lol... but if u notice the bars go from thick to thin at an even and constant angle... so it just looks better, to me at least, dont take my crits as fact if u dont want to, im not an expert

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    The light blue Highlights give it some strength

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    yo prea im pretty much diggin all the letters man, you just might want to work on proportions a little bit more. i know you know that e is just not fittin in there. everyone says i need to work on my 3d (fury inparticular) so i gave it a shot, just a lil rough sketch. critsss would be appreciated

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    Looking much better zewl. The e in the top one is messed up on the bottom part where it curves up, but good otherwise.

    Prea- SPace the letters out more, the E is too hidden. and that R kicking out so much messed it up. Just give the E some room and it would be fine

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    assuming the 3d's goin straight down, the far right tip of the L should have some 3d on it too i think a piece exchange is overdue with us zewl, wuddyasay?

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    well i have work all week but maybe just a straigh letter or whateverr ill see whats up but yeahhh im down no due date

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    keep working on it zewl youll get it..

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    trying to get down with different styles





    the R is hurtin on this one ^

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    Prea the second one looks pretty decent.. I like the flow of th letters bending(besides the E)...The First one is wiggidy wack because the P is garbage... Fix it lol... The one on the Bottom has a nice P...

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    crits please. i know im bad.. sucks bc im not getting better :/


    zewl, you missed 3d on the w on the lower.
    Last edited by EXI; 11-01-2010 at 02:19 PM.

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    messing around with different letters. Any dope writers write Repo?

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    Quote Originally Posted by EXI View Post
    crits please. i know im bad.. sucks bc im not getting better :/


    zewl, you missed 3d on the w on the lower.
    dude take it slow youll get better..but not after writing your name 8 times..id also change my name to bukkake i mean youve kuake already so... and safe isnt really a good example for bars n shit.
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    lordplankton- I don't understand what your saying :s... except that takign it slower. thats it.


 

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