i agree with future go way simpler and work on ketter structure
crits please, just really simple.. im bored at home with some highlighteres :/
i agree with future go way simpler and work on ketter structure
crits please, just really simple.. im bored at home with some highlighteres :/
Last edited by EXI; 11-06-2010 at 02:10 PM.
Something quick I did for another thread, criticisms more than welcome...
nice and simple, pushin the porportions though, but nice
Some old shit
cdfvgsdewfrgdfvbg.... sorry i was wiping my cum off of the computer after I saw that. Mone your shit is fresh.
^^^ lol wow kid....that's all i have to say about that....this is kind of random and off topic, but. Has anyone else come to realize that you can really tell how far along a writer is by the way he writes? not just his hand or whatever but you know his writing in general.
can someone just tell me the main reason why do i need to get back to simples? already started doing them again but a detailed crit. would be nice
comm please ??
that z kind of looks like a wack r, if you know what im sayin. and the e is a little bit bigger then the rest. other then that, i like your style.
Originally Posted by ChadWarden
I need some opinions please
kthx
cell....how bout ...ya cant read what the others say at all. no structure, no flow, bars all odd widths 3d shot. loose the extensions, they are senseless... need more to go on or does that about cover it?
there is a reason people tell you go simple. its because the basics need to be solid before you move up the ladder and your graff actually makes sense. otherwise you could to on doing what your doing. graff the word hfgihugrh , tell everyone it says awesome and see how good your bullshitting skills are..
Mogan,smooth style i am a fan of your pieces
Phat i like most of it bud but i think i would have kept solid conventional 3d. the bubbles and white make it hard to tell the diff between 3d and the pebble background
bump for crits please
it's very simple i know, but everytime I try to add some style I fuck it up..
Not much to say really, I think it speaks for it's self, basic bars... I'm trying to think of ways that you can make it more stylish without forcing you into a position where you copy something, as it's better to develop your own style than imitate others. However, if you're really struggling maybe it would be better to; that way you can work on slowly manipulating the shape of letters without trying something so complicated, that you don't know how the letters should look and end up fucking it up. Here's a few dubs and pieces from round my way, I think they're good examples of how to manipulate the shape of the letters without making it look ugly or un-natural.
Very simple, but very stylish. Try not to copy, but try and add some of these curves and angles to your bars, to give your basic letters style. You can then work on more complicated stuff from there...
then don't add any style, EXI, just try different widths and heights, try different coloring styles, shadows and 3D, shines... experiment experiment experiment BUT keep the simple letters. don't add extensions and try to style your letters up just yet, master your straight letters first and then move on to adding style little by little, not now though, I dont think ure ready yet.
another remark that I think I've mentioned before, change ur name, there's a zewl bomber on these forums goes by nose2.
make all your letters the same dimensions with all the bars the same width. (see how the R's taller and the W's wider than the other letters)
trial and error kid... go for it
I don't think he's ready for that level of style yet, Minx
on another note, I need more comments and crits on my piece up there - specifically regarding letter structure and other letter-related issues. I think that's the area where I need most work on
Thanks Boomslang
Last edited by Phat 2; 11-07-2010 at 03:40 PM.
Dont paint Dizer or DIZE or even Doze for that Matter.doze exist, and i don't know that...i change my nick in DIZE or DIZER...
new sketch, similar style, diferent name
1)Dizer/Dize Paints with Augor from MSK and he's from Ohio (He very established and upper a lot.)
2) Doze......Man not trying to knock you at all but are you tryin to rock DOSE's style from the Ironlak Team. Serious...Your work is mad influenced by him I can seriously tell. If you contiune to rock that ish someone is really going to call you out like big time.
Last edited by (SoS)Viruz; 11-07-2010 at 03:54 PM.
random fliks
CMV
supposed to say priest but the s let me down
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phat 2 - coming out with some real style there man. the A could prob use a little work tho
unique - ill. would be nice to see more stuff like that man
few months back. had to edit out some scribble and writing from the back.
I also explained to you why I am roling with this name. It means ALOT to me to use this name, if that means being close to Zewl, I'm fine with that, my dad gave me inspiration for everything, if I started graffiti'ing when he was alive he would buy me paint, buy me markers etc. I feel that since I have used this name, I have wanted to write more and wanted to perfect it because my dad deserves to be looking up from where ever he is and see that I'm admiring him with what I enjoy doing.
On topic-
I see what your talking about, I'll probably draw out 4 perfect simple REWL's and fill, shade, shine, highlight, 3d them all different and get the hang of them and see what you guys think. Thanks for the crits to both of you, minx and Phat.
As of crits on your piece, It's very sick and fresh, ONLY thing I don't like with your porportions is your A on the left bar, how there's a piece missing, I don't think it fits it that well, but hey, I'm a toy
swae
canvas ive been working on
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