@ FluffyBunnies: Everything looks pretty legit except for your D....kinda looks like a "b".
@ Unique93: I really like your 3d...I don't know if i'm feelin' the Z that's underlining it though. And I think your middle bar on your E should have went across, instead of down...I like those cut things you do in your shit though, so I tried it out here...but I'm still just tryin' to work on 3d for the most part.
first sketch. crits? toy. need crits!
dont try and modify graffiti creator fag boy the letters on that sit are dumb
rask keep it up
zewl i think you should round you z more
crits on mine
i painted this thats y is juss a sketch
i pooped here ^^
Last edited by woonybomber; 11-24-2010 at 12:02 AM.
i assume thats Coke? shits pretty dope, but some of its just too much, less radom shit would be nice, and your letter flow could use work, try making the first/last letter flow better, still tho shits dope
nice clean style zewl, your 3d is fine
sorry for double post,
i fucked up the k and also tryed a new tag
your shit is kind of going sideways.....And your R is a lot bigger then the rest.
@Woony...I just saw your piece in the toy bombs thread, so I'm not going to take any advice you give me.....ever.
rask does it right the way the letters float is ill
unique93 and plankton you guys shouldv put that shit in the intermediate thread
REWL-lose the extensions and give your letters lots more funk
SECH-too much extensions and the 3d isnt in perspective...your overall styles nice tho i feel the pointy shit
I was told to come back here, so, crits?
Coke - The only thing good about any of those pieces is the E on the first piece...the rest of it is pretty wack. Simplify it up a lottt.
Rask, try using a thinner middle bar on the R and K
Rewl, do exactly what is on your keyboard.
Last edited by kringe; 11-24-2010 at 10:42 PM.
thanks... ima try to make it flow up like that and have the k leg droop down to get a wavy flow goin, and make the letters cleaner
Also, make your strokes faster, you have a fuck ton of hesitation lines on the outline
yeah.. dont ever use sharpies , il work it out
kringe botrh bangggin
thanks for the crits guys
^ looks good, super light pink looks kinda weird tho should just go over it w/ the regular pink