Zook: nice throw likin the o, likin the sketch below but looks wonkyyy, probably just the photo
Unique: both sketchess are dope 1st one could do with a bit more light blue ?
Dize Nice fills bro.. your pieces are looking proper... what kind of marker are you using?
I use this for blocks
and this for fills
jus some quick shit... crits?
Last edited by JesterOner; 11-28-2010 at 12:23 PM.
unique 93 thats ill waz goood
Void - i like the second and third piece. alls i would say is dont tweak the placement them so theyre tilted differently or try not to change the size of the letters. good ideas though, like the fills. keep workin
Swae - cool style. maybe change the leg or the R
First page in my black book. Ive been writing graffiti on and off the past 3 years and I finally decided to settle down with one name and actually work towards getting better at it. Crits please. I personally feel like my throwup is kinda toyish.
ive been doing graff for about a year, im trying to keep this name. any crits will help, thanks
Last edited by emore1; 11-28-2010 at 08:26 PM.
like the fill on the first one emor, but the sharp edge on the r doesnt really flow with the whole bubbly feel
also, work on letter structure, you need it man
would this be a better R
and this was just something i was trying. different style but whatever
aint clean, I know
ONE-i personally think writing ONE is wack.. has potential to be a simple throw though. add some style to you're E and find a way to unify those letters-not physically, but with some reoccuring element.
SWAE-i like where it's going, I'd try and upper case A. I think the bottom bar on the G is out of place imo
NEK- ditch the tiny bits coming off your K and N, and make your bars and legs a bit more rectangular, less triangular?
EMORE-same above, ditch the little bits coming off your M and R and whatnot, but I like the E and the rising sun fill. Your last picture could be pretty nice, gotta change the E on that one though. Make it more like the R to flow and add some steez.
MONE-looks sick, imo the N shouldnt be chopped off or tucked behind the E
more people gotta give crits... used to be 'give crits to get em'
It looks good to me bro. I like that sloppy look man
fuckin nice mone