Exi; dont use drips untill you got your letter structure down cos its looking pretty sloppy.
Diesel; try make all the letters the same height and the letters are pretty poor.
Sbal; work on width consistency on your bars some bits look a bit fat and the 3ds a bit of too.
1ok; dont really understand the concepttt of it? put it looks nice aha
stuck in cos of the snow, jus trying some new stuff out with the second one,
critzzzzzzz?
Last edited by JesterOner; 12-02-2010 at 04:33 AM.
i see what you mean, i hate using rulers .Originally Posted by EXI
okay with the simple:
bars aren't the same, see how the right bar of the H is slanting, make the all the same width if possible, and don't cram your letters up that much, and dont worry about pressin down too hard, i do it too you'll start goin lighter
and crits please wondering if i should finish
diesel check the toy questions thread, i asked about a name there recently and people gave good advice
also, got one comment on this, but anyone else? the more advice the better
i like the colors you used, and the marker marks on your pic makes it look nice,what markers you used? and the m is kinda messed up, and the might be too long i'm not sure tho.diesel check the toy questions thread, i asked about a name there recently and people gave good advice
also, got one comment on this, but anyone else? the more advice the better
thanks for the crits manExi; dont use drips untill you got your letter structure down cos its looking pretty sloppy.
Diesel; try make all the letters the same height and the letters are pretty poor.
Sbal; work on width consistency on your bars some bits look a bit fat and the 3ds a bit of too.
1ok; dont really understand the concepttt of it? put it looks nice aha
stuck in cos of the snow, jus trying some new stuff out with the second one,
critzzzzzzz?
My name is my dads initials and he was my inspiration for anything and he died june this year so, just make it something that means to you
Shit I did....toy shit right?
Sory is my boi so dont say shit bout em'
M is a bit sloppy, i just used a blue highlighter for the main fill, i just went side to side with the chisel tip and then went over the bottom half again after is was dry then did a third coat on the very bottom. i outlined with a blue crayola marker and the green is just a green highlighter xD workin with what i got lol
@Conor, whered you get those stickers? I wanna get some of those
Love that "Hope" jester. Keep it up!
INTERMEDIATE THREAD^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
unique bringin the HEAT with this one
props my man
Meng you gotta cop some markers, but you're rockin the colored pencils with steez. Looks good, I thin the extension off the top of the Z looks goofy though. But keep that shit up
@ Dize : That D is hugeeee compared to the rest...and the E is reall small.....i like the fill and the Z though
bump
merge you got some bar problems and unnecessary extensions you might want to try simples more
unique is fire
gimme crits please
Duramax- Work on that hand broski, and there is no flow there. Try some keyboard simps and bars.
Female- Do more simple like stuff, but don't overlap it too much, it looks all jumbled up and the 3d's not overlapping correctly. Good effort though, much better then the other stuff.
Sore-I know it's been said, but your A's look like R's in the throws. The bars in the piece and that extension coming off of the bottom of the A are iffy
I know, I saw that after I put image on the net
unique- just blew my mind o.O
trying to get this new style down... crits?
phresh stickerss bump dat
Yeah I Admit That I Have Problems With It..
^^
Those stickers you posted are fucking GARBAGE.
@Ian- Dollargeneral or fuckin HappyHarrys..Its what a bunch of people around my hood use.
@Ghostwriter-Thanks yo im tryin to get up in the world...Ya know?
@IbuprofenTablets- I warnded you guys that im toy...Damn dont have to shuv it in my face..whats wrong with people these days?Why cant we get along and do what we're supposed to do?(Graffiti!!)
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