shits sick mone, and I think I know what your saying, I cant tell right now because I'm at school so I'll look at it in a minuteOriginally Posted by MoganOne
Rewl notice how your M and S have smaller open space? you should have tried that with the C and K... Meke them fatter... I will get the piece done soon...
Here is a different battle piece
Rewl Battle
Tasty McNasty... I'd stay with simples for now... your trying to force something at the moment from what i can see.
Rask i'd say the same work on like the structure of your letters and less on developing a 'style' yet... Just get the structure down first.
Mogan needs to stop posting in here and going to intermediate and possibly the 'big boys' soon.
Knine just stick with the top block buster simple for a while until you get that down... drop some 3d on it and shit.
Sick... that throw reminds me from like a year ago... the bottom sketch will be heading on the right lines definately just keeping busting out stuff like that but clean up your line work and shit.
Exi focus on structure still... simple lettering with a good solid structure...
Hope that helps.
k guys i was workin on a sketch for a friend's design contest, and i did a rough on looseleaf and im just transfering it to a plain sheet now, any crits or suggestions before I ink it? i haven't even begun to explore ad ons and shit and im worried if i put some on it'll fuck shit up. should i try adding some shit or leave it as it is?
ps. mogan stop posting here go to the int. thread already lol
pps. sorry for the shit quality
Dont write rask... please
Mone- the little top right bar on the K totally ruins the flow, make it going to the right not the left
@Mcdougall-I write "Merge" but im thinking of changing my name to "Heav"
Whatcha write?
pegcity- looks good man, wanna see it filled
Braaaaaainssssss FEK GFA
More crits on this please?Some simples I did earlier, Please give some critz that will help me improve!
If there iss something you want me to try or do next time, feel free to take the pic into Paint,Photoshop,etc. and show me what you mean, than re upload it here!
CRITZ PLEASE K THX
that's pretty clean, nice and simple. I noticed you've improved so much since I first saw you come on this site dude. I really am impressed and jealous you excelled so quick but good shit to you! Keep doing it!
Rewl Battle
Hmm can't really see where your going with this, maybe just work on structure? Thier's nothing bad i can say about this, just clean up your structure!k guys i was workin on a sketch for a friend's design contest, and i did a rough on looseleaf and im just transfering it to a plain sheet now, any crits or suggestions before I ink it? i haven't even begun to explore ad ons and shit and im worried if i put some on it'll fuck shit up. should i try adding some shit or leave it as it is?
ps. mogan stop posting here go to the int. thread already lol
pps. sorry for the shit quality
@morganone ur style is fresh clean lines and simple
@408bomber start to overlap your letters and curve your bars a bit
shit fast charac for talking
Hmm... so just a quick question. Which one of my simples do you like the best? The top one in the first pic or top one in the 2nd pic?
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colored the fill in photoshop says SAMMYE i dont like the A other then that crits??
stigma nice style...i like it
new sketch
knine- other than the curves in your N's i'd say the second one on top is best... but your handstyle is hurting... bad... simple it up and loose all the symbols and swirls in it...
stigma- i like it... except the A... but you already pointed that out
unique- keep it up... nuff said...
stigma, i agree with you the a doesnt fit everything else, nice double m's they look pretty close to the same. Awesome fill
unique- love your color style what you use for fill
Christmas Special...new sketch made it today..
@Crits please?^^
i like the colors but u shouldve somehow made the R more recognizable. the space between the arm is to little. sweet tho CHRISTMAS SPIRIT!!!!
@stigma - what everyone else said, lookin good aside from that A
@unique - love your style dude, letters and fill lookin great as always
@Conor - space piece looks good, although the top bars of the e look a little small compared to the rest of your letters and the e is farther away from the g than the spacing between all of the other letters. i like the o of the second but thats about it. it doesnt fit with any of the other letters, but the others arent very good anyway, maybe try to do a piece in the big bubbly style of that o. christmas theme is nice for that last one, but the letters themselves are pretty weak. the middle bars of the e's don't match, i don't really like the angle of the left side of the M, the R really doesn't look like an R, it just looks like a guy, and the packages for the G look too forced. try to make a more natural stack or something that doesnt have presents floating randomly and maybe emphasize the G with colors or size.
concept sketch for OCT31:
pretty simple, i was thinkin about leaving the CT and makin the 31 different. any suggestions before i ink/color it?
yo Merge, can you spell dog? you might want to stay in school homie, them double r words seem to be gettin ya. Sorry, Merry...lookin' like a fool. Oh and I don't know if you live near Ohio....'cause there's already a MERJE in Cincinatti...word
@Ian: pretty much on point...the 3 and 1 seem a little bit taller....but its all good. fill it in and throw some 3d on that bitch.
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