Yea i do thanks umm okay STYUL
might wanna try something differant lol.....
sleep on it bro, remember your name is a respresentation of you! Find something that inside your mind,body,and soul yu feel is just so right.
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No problem bro. That's what this community is for, helpng eachother out
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k9 lose the details in the 3d try to relax and draw straight lines it looks like your forcing it, you cant force your self to be creative..
this is kinda w/e but just lookin for a little bit of critique.
I know that thats the famous rask, i dont care, pretty surre he writes in a different continent than me, and if not w/e everyone writeseverything
Last edited by Rask Wsk LA; 12-12-2010 at 06:48 AM.
alright i really like the letter R, A, E, S so I does RASE sound okay?
alright ill try it and post it asap thanks
alright now how can i make the lettering better? this is just a really quick sketch so things arent real cleaned up
heres my simple where to go from here obviously modify letters but any specific advice as far as that goes?
You have to just keep doing simples for a while mann.
School sketch turned full pager
take that simple, and squish it together alittle
Edit: @thepekins , um alright but im not that good
@Rask, i like that piece dude, clean up the fill a bit but it looks pretty nice
@Raes, try curvin the S instead of doin it straight lines like that, you curved the R so do the same with the S. focus on bar consistency, lose the 3d for now and just do keyboard letters. once you're comfortable with that, move the letters together and start to overlap them, then maybe try a vanishing point for 3d, when you get good at that is when you can start messing around with shapes and stuff, but until then, keep it as simple as you can. it may sound boring, but this isnt something you can learn overnight
got around to coloring this one finally, dont really like the 1, and the 3 didnt turn out great either, and whoever suggested the x-ray thing, i was gonna do that, but i fucked it up. crits pleaseeee
just a quick simple + arrows. that oct31 came out dope, the pumpkin is killin that shit, hit a christmas style