the fuck is going on in here?
the fuck is going on in here?
omes - that shit is pretty dope, nice style and flow.
mauf - ????????
ribvage - eh, weird negative space between the E and A, just weird negative space in general.... and the R an E are pretty whack.
Kringe - those are nice but make sure you get some better structure, it's not bad but could use some work.
PREA your letters definitely need work, especially that A
@kringe; dont like the first ones, second ones okay work on the M
@rib; dont like the R and E extensions go a bit simpler
@prea; not feeling it, extensions are weird
@unique; on point as alwayss
critzzz?
jest - lose the felt tip pens and sort out the scaling of the letters
btw i tohught you O was a S for som reason
prea we should battle.
word is BARE if you're down, or anyone else
A rough sketch for a body painting I'm going to do today. Wings say "Fallen Angel".
We are the paint breathers...
We bleed colors with our bloody stubs that were our thumbs for the artistic evolution.
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acrsk- dude thats pretty fukin dope, except , not really feelin the halo
Please elaborate?Originally Posted by ViniVidiVici
still waiting till christmas to get some better pens aha
i like those letters fat
acrsk: niceee i like it but the letters but there a bit squashed
cnc?
r is fucked so dont look at it
the e needs to be lowered so that the bar meets with the a if you get me? and the c is leaning too much. throwie looks nice tho work on the H looks like a K
only thing ima change on that is the R, and you check your own shit bro cause im gettin bunk crits from you and then i see your shit and go wtf? I think you need to slow down on the crit giving until your own shit is better
Mone, that's a really bad spot for that break in the O. It makes it look too much like a C.
And the left side of the M is too thick. And too straight, as is the left of the n.
Euro, watch your widths. Don't slant the piece upward.
On the one on the top of the page,....yeah don't do that.
Reach, your R is structurally wrong. Have the leg come out of the bottom of the loop of the R, instead of the backbone. And then the shit Joker said
And don't be scared to bend the bars so that for instance, the e actually looks like the one here, e
Acrsk, watch your widths, and the style varies a lot. And it's squished.
unique - sick as hell what did u use to color? and it needs more color...do another one with fill
yeh i get you but you cant improve if your not getting harsh critz? but yeh i'll slow down on the critz
nah the crits werent harsh, thats not what i was sayin at all, just it seem like your just givin the crits so some1 will crit your shit instead of thinkin it out and givin 1 that is actually helpful, if anything i would say give a harsher crit then you did and be more thorough if you want people to know what you mean
@kring yea...but that e is not curved on purpose bro, rounded e wouldnt have fit the style of the rest
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