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    That S in the first one was really creative. I liked it. And the canvas is lookin good too.

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    Leash I like that straight on the last page, throw would look better w/out points.
    Swae on the second piece, the Extens from the W seems to overpower the A, or distract it i guess.
    RZN simple that shit out, make your tags look like your handwriting, which is quite neat, for now.
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    Sbaner, I liked that last one alot. The other ones were ok too, just I think you should work on making your letters the same size. I have the same problem sometimes :/

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    sbal-keep it up with the bombs there not that bad,and work on keeping your letters leaner and more evenly structured

    sloppy two pager in my boy snoes book.

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    Just some shit i did in a couple mins, gunna actually try on one tonight
    Okae- nice shit
    Sbal- try keeping the same size
    swae- dope shit as always
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    Quote Originally Posted by smooth_nuts View Post
    sbal-keep it up with the bombs there not that bad,and work on keeping your letters leaner and more evenly structured

    sloppy two pager in my boy snoes book.
    Looks nice! did you do the whole page? you need to work on your handy

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    i honestly suck at handstyles unless im useing my oneliner or some simples lol.
    and yeppers i did the whole page

    A wack one....
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    Not particularly "new" done last jan but I feel pretty confident in it - would like to know what others think...

    Smooth- thats straight only the A looks a little small and don't think the middle bar works too well. I like the throws though both of em on the last page

    Rask- keep simple for right now, get rid of all the extensions until you get some solid simples- your bar withs are all over the place

    Swae- I like the bottom two- get rid of the middle ones W extension on the bottom right that shits ugly - and unnecessary

    Sbal- third down is the clearest one- work with that but try doing it in your own letters

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    yeah i was a bit to high when i tried to do that lol....

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    Shell703, That shit looks niice, the yellow makes it pop. but I cant make out what it says Im gunna try somethin with that light blue and yellow. If thats ok..

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    OKAE im diggin your shit except for that middle bar on the A. I just got the Ironlak Strikers set after ordering them bitches on the 13th, and 3 of them are fucking dead. Need to figure out what to do. Here's some quick ish though to test em out


    Ignore the attempt at the ripoff pieces haha

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    Hahaha ZEWL I love all that paint on your shoes! and your headphones are missing the earpiece lol but back to graff. you always have such perfect straights. and the Strikers seem to color well, i might order some.

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    work on that handstyle, and kill that char on the right of your throw

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    pretty nice Zewl, the Z is a little small tho
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    Rhez- it says PATOS- have at that blue and yellow, I wanna see what you come up with*

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    RASK- A LOT better, thats a solid straight letter, I like that pink fill a lot now try adding some extensions and connections like add in the end loop of the K like in your hand- don't go too crazy simple is stronger

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    Coes- Not saying it's not good, but aspects of it seeme reminiscent of Copes throw.
    Zewl, sick straight. Ive got some OTR markers right now, they're pretty sick. I wanna try strikers though.
    Rask- Not really feeling the S or the K, Giv e the S more space i think.

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    yeah,, the S is alittle squished and the K is kinda small, thanks

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    colored it... shadows bad and every letter gets smaller, h is pinner compared to rest but whatever....crit it


 

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