So i'll thats how my lines would become straight too right?
So i'll thats how my lines would become straight too right?
Quick pen sketch, crits always welcome.
I think Im gonna stop doing that bar on the right side of the L, looks kinda awkward.
Even bars. Use even bars.
Sick can i show you the one i did without a ruler.
@female - u dont need to ask just post it
Using even bars, I already got that the top bar of the S is way too big and the O looks more like a D. Anything else?
Yeah but you know how people are on the internet so i'll just pm it to you diesel
fine with me
like how it looks i would love to see what the finished product looks @diesel i PMed you.Originally Posted by Airplanefood
Using even bars, I already got that the top bar of the S is way too big and the O looks more like a D. Anything else?
Eh, im not really a fan of how it came out. the 3d shouldnt be pink. it makes the red in the 3d hard to see. but hey, crits welcome
the O looks too round for the other letters. everything else is kinda squared off while the O is rounded. doesnt really look like it fits. other then that i like it. And i like the beastie boy reference as well.
Using even bars, I already got that the top bar of the S is way too big and the O looks more like a D. Anything else?
example- what dont you understand about the word "simple"? cause honestly that looks like trash
@ example can't read it, only letters i see are the a's and the n's, but i actually like the red and pink in fact thats all i like, everything else is bad. looks like you might be forcin style that you aint got skill at yet too hard, instead of focusing on your lettering
Last edited by ribcage; 12-21-2010 at 09:55 PM.
I like nothing about that piece...
so i started back in november, trying to see if im progressing along the right track, or just getting worse. i took some random flicks of my book, they're in order of when they were done
a few throws:
supposed to be a backwards two and an upside down L
same deal with an upside J as well
and some quick/shitty 3d attempts
Fresh from the box. I try to pay attention to letter structure, bars, and size alignment (keyboard letters, etc). I fill my book with pages of handys and basic block letter experimentation. I read books, mags, and pieces online regarding the history of writing every chance I get. Some of my first pieces ever, crit me hard brothers.
swey
First attempt at anything that looks like anything
A couple handys and a basic block keyboard lettering
Basic handys
My main problems are with my S in general (making it look good and modifying it at all), and somewhat with my Y. I try basic mod experiments with my W, E, and Y by bending the bars in different directions but I can't figure out how to add a similar effect to the S. Any suggestions along with plenty of crits are welcomed openly.
@swey the left of the W in the first pic is too big and the E might be uneven then again it could be my eye sight
I'm a hot and bothered astronaut crashing while jacking off to buffering vids of Asher Roth eatting apple sauce
Yeah, I definitely need to work on evening my spacing, bar length, and alignment. Just clued in to bubble letters somehow / for some reason last night before I went to bed..
the bubble letters in the 2nd pic look pretty even. the S may be too small.
Last edited by Female; 12-22-2010 at 08:50 AM.
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