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    Quickie for a battle.

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    Sorry for it being so big. Dont know how to make it smaller. But uhh Crits please.
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    Oh I think I bit that A from someone, or somewhere.... donno who or where though :/

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    Look at your keyboard. See how simple and straight all of the letters are?
    Make all of your pieces like that for a while. Make them out of bars as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Aristrocracy_ View Post
    Tasty i actually do other artwork and I am very good at it so thats what the prismas are for, they also just happen to be my only markers.
    ah i feel ya. im the same but im just not confident enough to use my prismas for graff yet...

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    bumpski for crits...
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    If you take a close look at BAYR's A, it looks like it's squirming to get out of the piece. For real. No offense.

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    TastyMcNasty, you need to do keyboard letters as well. That's pretty wack. It lacks consistency and the structure is off in more than one place.

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    Tasty/soar, the negative space under the O and A isnt good, and the 3d going up makes it look wack, structure is okay, some wac extesions in there too

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    Tasty, I just bought my second 24 pack so I don't have a whole lot to worry about. I bought mine for $50.00 on amazon but if anyone knows a better deal than let me know. Also decos are nice and they are pretty easy to rak from my Micheals.

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    'armen'




    crits?

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    ^^^bottom left part of your a looks weird. R is tight, id try connecting bottom right bar to the M at the bottom instead of that thin bar connecting it to to the top because of the way u connected the m to the e. N's right side look like it dont fit the rest, the whole sketch is mostly squared off and then the right part of the n is all curvy, i think if u fixed ur shit up a bit it would look dope tho

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    thanks! ill try touching it up

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    fix your bar width too, lots of incosistency.
    at the end the E and N are curving upwards, you should try to lower them down
    and the right side of the A is awkward the way you made it next to the R, kinda to far apart,
    add some 3d and color then itll be steeze

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    just some straight up letters did a lower case y because i wasnt gonna have enough room to get school shit done but i think it came out sweet....
    @stay i like the style but the little pig tail on the N is kinda outa place

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Aristrocracy_ View Post
    Tasty, I just bought my second 24 pack so I don't have a whole lot to worry about. I bought mine for $50.00 on amazon but if anyone knows a better deal than let me know. Also decos are nice and they are pretty easy to rak from my Micheals.
    dude thats fucken cheap! my 12 pac costed more... and i make sure do grab some next time i need some markers or somethin

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    Still working on keeping bar width consistent.
    And yeah, the handstyle sucks
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    reduce the dead space inbetween the O and the L, bar width is okay

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    Quote Originally Posted by kringe View Post
    TastyMcNasty, you need to do keyboard letters as well. That's pretty wack. It lacks consistency and the structure is off in more than one place.
    i know what youre saying... and i can admit my A and my O are pre wack in that "peice"

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    skabksdbfdjskkdjsfndvksndfdv... havent posted a flick in sooo long... so here is a fancy unfinished slap... anybody wanna ship usps slaps up to canada????
    and the one for reassurance

    and 1 last 1...
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    Rehz straighted up your letters
    ... listen to rask... he's got the lowdown

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    Do simples.


 

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