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    cric- i think id wait till you get better at fills, before you use something as high end as prismas///

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    Can I get some Crits?

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    make the m bigger and follow the style alittle more and that shit will run

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    I'd love some constructive criticism. Thanks in advance




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    Tasty i actually do other artwork and I am very good at it so thats what the prismas are for, they also just happen to be my only markers.

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    Quickie for a battle.

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    Sorry for it being so big. Dont know how to make it smaller. But uhh Crits please.
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    Oh I think I bit that A from someone, or somewhere.... donno who or where though :/

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    Look at your keyboard. See how simple and straight all of the letters are?
    Make all of your pieces like that for a while. Make them out of bars as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Aristrocracy_ View Post
    Tasty i actually do other artwork and I am very good at it so thats what the prismas are for, they also just happen to be my only markers.
    ah i feel ya. im the same but im just not confident enough to use my prismas for graff yet...

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    bumpski for crits...
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    If you take a close look at BAYR's A, it looks like it's squirming to get out of the piece. For real. No offense.

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    TastyMcNasty, you need to do keyboard letters as well. That's pretty wack. It lacks consistency and the structure is off in more than one place.

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    Tasty/soar, the negative space under the O and A isnt good, and the 3d going up makes it look wack, structure is okay, some wac extesions in there too

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    Tasty, I just bought my second 24 pack so I don't have a whole lot to worry about. I bought mine for $50.00 on amazon but if anyone knows a better deal than let me know. Also decos are nice and they are pretty easy to rak from my Micheals.

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    'armen'




    crits?

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    ^^^bottom left part of your a looks weird. R is tight, id try connecting bottom right bar to the M at the bottom instead of that thin bar connecting it to to the top because of the way u connected the m to the e. N's right side look like it dont fit the rest, the whole sketch is mostly squared off and then the right part of the n is all curvy, i think if u fixed ur shit up a bit it would look dope tho

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    thanks! ill try touching it up

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    fix your bar width too, lots of incosistency.
    at the end the E and N are curving upwards, you should try to lower them down
    and the right side of the A is awkward the way you made it next to the R, kinda to far apart,
    add some 3d and color then itll be steeze

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    just some straight up letters did a lower case y because i wasnt gonna have enough room to get school shit done but i think it came out sweet....
    @stay i like the style but the little pig tail on the N is kinda outa place

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    Quote Originally Posted by _Aristrocracy_ View Post
    Tasty, I just bought my second 24 pack so I don't have a whole lot to worry about. I bought mine for $50.00 on amazon but if anyone knows a better deal than let me know. Also decos are nice and they are pretty easy to rak from my Micheals.
    dude thats fucken cheap! my 12 pac costed more... and i make sure do grab some next time i need some markers or somethin


 

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