found a marker and paper at work
the result of fiddling around while bored:
@Phat: Definitely not feelin all those swirls bro. Gives me a headache
I really like the way this one turned out. Any thoughts?
havent posted on here for a while heres what i have been working on.
phat the swirls kill it and block the A
nose that is pretty sick ink it
Last edited by Stigma02; 02-07-2011 at 09:04 PM.
fix the bottom half of your S, and make the H wider. CLA looks good though
new style im going with on the exchange.
Heads up I just took up a 4 letter word once to feel it out. chill the hell out. I don't go by sane I just figured hey I don't use those letters often. So if someone happened to have a similar idea awhile ago I really don't give a shit. And again the shit took me like 5 minutes so ease up just figured I'd work on my lettering and hopefully get some crits since my last crit said my work was nearly elligible. But sure thanks for overlooking the idea completely simply becasue the letters have been used before.
zewl,lose some of those extensions and add ons.you got alot of them and it takes away from the actual letters,the L should be elongated becasue its leg is kinda long and it makes it look a bit like a w.i would lose the arrow hearts on the w too.but thats me.
all in all its not bad,it just seems jumbled.you look like your using too many add ons to cover up negative space,you should try different spacing and a thicker 3d.that will make the negative space less noticable.
can i get some crits plzz
thanks for the crits dudes.....i left that piece at my girls house, but i might find time to draw up a new one
also the addons are weak
what do you guy's think
Last edited by leash; 02-08-2011 at 02:10 PM.
What is the 3d on the first one?! haha
there is no 3d those are my weak addons
Thought the first one said Clash for a second. I was gunna be a pissed nugga. lol
pissed about what? someone writing your name that has been used and abused by hundreds of writers over the years? clash is super unoriginal dude.trust me on that.dont be suprised to see someone else with it in the near future,you will meet tons more than likely.
just throwin that out thereeeeeeeeskgjflkgjalkgfaflkjalknja.b./
i didnt put this was in the intermediate thread just cuz i fucked up so much
not final either i got the final exchange bein worked on now