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    ure double posting
    arent we done with this sketch already ?

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    it's a totally different sketch...just still can't come up with a good W...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flawless Victory View Post
    HOLY FUCK EVERYONE NEEDS TO STOP FUCKING WRITING SANE.
    Seriously, what the fuck?
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    I'm a toy ass prick. I know.

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    I don't think you understand how much time of your life you just wasted to try and be funny...and failed..

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    looks pretty much the same to me, so imma give u the same crits as last time... do an upside down M. if it helps, flip the page.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NosE2 View Post
    I don't think you understand how much time of your life you just wasted to try and be funny...and failed..
    Nah, not to be funny, just to be a douche. And it took like, 10 seconds lol

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    found a marker and paper at work
    the result of fiddling around while bored:


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    @Phat: Definitely not feelin all those swirls bro. Gives me a headache

    I really like the way this one turned out. Any thoughts?

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    Quote Originally Posted by NosE2 View Post
    unfinished....would like some crits...like what 3d, etc.
    you should tweak the W a little bit
    other than that its a solid piece in my opinion

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    havent posted on here for a while heres what i have been working on.

    phat the swirls kill it and block the A
    nose that is pretty sick ink it
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cl4sh View Post
    I really like the way this one turned out. Any thoughts?

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    Bottom page bump

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    fix the bottom half of your S, and make the H wider. CLA looks good though

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    new style im going with on the exchange.

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    Heads up I just took up a 4 letter word once to feel it out. chill the hell out. I don't go by sane I just figured hey I don't use those letters often. So if someone happened to have a similar idea awhile ago I really don't give a shit. And again the shit took me like 5 minutes so ease up just figured I'd work on my lettering and hopefully get some crits since my last crit said my work was nearly elligible. But sure thanks for overlooking the idea completely simply becasue the letters have been used before.



    Quote Originally Posted by FlippingChickens View Post
    lmfao,i agree.


    romero - i really like that looks kinda euro style,id just take of the arrow on the bottom of the h and the swirl on the t..i think a thick black outline would look fresh.

    ian - thats the best ive seen from you,keep doing simples like that,it will pay off. only thing i dont like is how u bended the "e" at the bottom.

    ribcage - the "reach" peice isnt too bad,just watch were your bending some of the letters because some parts looks wierd, also your coloring is nice but you shouldnt be focused on that ,work on letters first.

    sane - dont write sane..and work on more simple letters.

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    http://www.google.com/images?client=...w=1440&bih=705

    lolol

    learn some graff history bro

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    Quote Originally Posted by NosE2 View Post
    unfinished....would like some crits...like what 3d, etc.
    lookin better with each revision, i think yer L looks more like a W tho bud

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    zewl,lose some of those extensions and add ons.you got alot of them and it takes away from the actual letters,the L should be elongated becasue its leg is kinda long and it makes it look a bit like a w.i would lose the arrow hearts on the w too.but thats me.


    all in all its not bad,it just seems jumbled.you look like your using too many add ons to cover up negative space,you should try different spacing and a thicker 3d.that will make the negative space less noticable.

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    can i get some crits plzz

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    thanks for the crits dudes.....i left that piece at my girls house, but i might find time to draw up a new one

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    also the addons are weak


    what do you guy's think
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