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    Homie of mine; felt like trying some new shit out.
    Top throw is a oneline, besides the O hole obviously

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    says JUSTIN
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    ^J looks like a T and the left bar of the n is slackin

    @tasty on the one line the m to L looks hella wierd, u make the right most bar of the m a little thicker or kick out a lil bit itd look dope

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    Like the letter forms swae, not sure if the arrow on the S is necessary, but it doesnt ruin the piece.

    finished the one i posted the other day, not sure how i feel about it.

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    justin ill
    free exists

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    swae i want to see that piece with the w the same style as all the other letters

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    all pen freestyle from school. the p is retarded in this first one






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    I don't really have any crits for that, just a question. Why do you write so many words? You could be sooo much better if you got used to whatever the word is that you write. But everytime you post it's always a collection of like 6 or 7 things.

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    some recent stuff
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rehz View Post
    I don't really have any crits for that, just a question. Why do you write so many words? You could be sooo much better if you got used to whatever the word is that you write. But everytime you post it's always a collection of like 6 or 7 things.
    its called practice... if you only write one word, you'll only be good at writing its letters, unless your word uses all the alphabet's letters

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    @OG x KUSH x Try using bars or going simpler

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rehz View Post
    I don't really have any crits for that, just a question. Why do you write so many words? You could be sooo much better if you got used to whatever the word is that you write. But everytime you post it's always a collection of like 6 or 7 things.
    basically what paht said. I just get bored of my name and like to do different letters. And yeah its good practice.

    @kush dont fucking write kwest! google that shit before you make it yo name!!!

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    dear everyone. SIMPLER!!!
    looks shitty in the picture. whatever. 5 minute quickie


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    quick simp

    safe i like that a lot, it has nice flow and the fill looks nice. only suggestions id have is to have that one part of the a go through instead of going over (take out the horizontal lines where it overlaps) and make your bars more equal. some of the flares are good but the middle of the S, right of the a, middle of the f and top left of the e seem too thin IMO

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    I've been practicing with a new handy, "Bow", because I figure it will be faster and easier when I go out, and tried out some new stuff.
    I know the B in the really wild one is the tutorial one, but I couldn't find one that worked well so just critique the O and W.
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    Quote Originally Posted by HUMAN View Post
    I've been practicing with a new handy, "Bow", because I figure it will be faster and easier when I go out, and tried out some new stuff.
    I know the B in the really wild one is the tutorial one, but I couldn't find one that worked well so just critique the O and W.
    NO NO NO NO NO. Alright, First of all, your name isn't called a handy. It's a name. A handy is what is know by most people as a tag. Second, three letters is a crew, so unless you're a whole crew by yourself, new name. Third of all, never try anything remotely similar to that last one for a LONG time. Lastly, Simples.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flawless Victory View Post





    Homie of mine; felt like trying some new shit out.
    Top throw is a oneline, besides the O hole obviously
    finna bump this shit, because because.


 

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