Blackbooks

[NosE2]

no....go simple...so it looks like...FREE

[Norfsuthr]

Werm, keepem level, the m is flying off. Looks ok though overall tho.
Farout- A needs some work, and make them all the same size. Nice R.

[ian]

in class simps FTW

[SicK-]

noise make all your bars the same width. honestly that simp is ugly as shit

[Norfsuthr]

Noise, move that e farther from the S. And keep your bars relatively the same width until you're better. Also dont do that inline/shine looking thing in the letters, or make it look good.


Dont mind the charac, I was just bored and added it. I know it doesnt go with it.

[ian]

haha damn kiddies, bein a little harsh tonight are we? Whatever, it was just a cure for my boredom and took me like 5 mins, dont expect it to be a masterpiece. 3rd i like that, id say stretch the bottom curve of the 3 to the right a little more, the R and D both seem to be stretched a bit to the bottom right and it would fit better if the 3 was too

[Flawless Victory]

Homie of mine; felt like trying some new shit out.
Top throw is a oneline, besides the O hole obviously

[Stigma02]

says JUSTIN

[ribcage]

^J looks like a T and the left bar of the n is slackin

@tasty on the one line the m to L looks hella wierd, u make the right most bar of the m a little thicker or kick out a lil bit itd look dope

[swae101]

[militia]

Like the letter forms swae, not sure if the arrow on the S is necessary, but it doesnt ruin the piece.

finished the one i posted the other day, not sure how i feel about it.

[Phat 2]

justin ill
free exists

[Stigma02]

swae i want to see that piece with the w the same style as all the other letters

[leash]

[thepekins]

all pen freestyle from school. the p is retarded in this first one

[Rehz]

I don't really have any crits for that, just a question. Why do you write so many words? You could be sooo much better if you got used to whatever the word is that you write. But everytime you post it's always a collection of like 6 or 7 things.

[pointman]

[OG x KUSH x]

some recent stuff

[Phat 2]

I don't really have any crits for that, just a question. Why do you write so many words? You could be sooo much better if you got used to whatever the word is that you write. But everytime you post it's always a collection of like 6 or 7 things.

its called practice... if you only write one word, you'll only be good at writing its letters, unless your word uses all the alphabet's letters

[Female]

@OG x KUSH x Try using bars or going simpler